i am in love
u r beautiful
like a living universe
everytime i look at u
i find something beautiful
in your eyes there,s shine
just wanna fall into them
this mistrious look is beautful
u r my night
u r my day
u r my universe
oh! universe is beautiful
i am helpless before you
someone help me
oh! this helplessness is beautful.
2006-07-10 22:00:50 · 26 answers · asked by Anonymous in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
I think it's pretty decent, and I think that, considering you are a guy, for you to sit down and think and take the time about a poem for the one you love-I think that's sweet. You're a sweetheart. :o)
2006-07-10 22:04:20 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
Ok, it is clear that you are in love. The poem I think is good because it shows you feelings towards this person. A poem is a personal thing, so what I think could be something completely different to what someone else thinks. Try dedicating it to the one you love, I find that makes them appreciate you.
2006-07-11 05:04:34 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I read it line by line and word by word .. and I found nothing special. But when come to the last word ... WOW!! It's beautiful ... "This Helplessness is Beautiful" is very nice and beautiful ...
2006-07-11 05:05:39 · answer #3 · answered by Orsca 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
its lovely... cos its from ur heart. and if anybody has anyhting nasty to say abt ur poem, ask them to take a hike. nobody has a right ot comment on a persons feelings anyway. all the best for ur future poems.
2006-07-11 05:04:53 · answer #4 · answered by tobeornottobe 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's nice to see people in love. I think its cute, give it to her. She'll love that you took time to express your feelings.
2006-07-11 06:15:35 · answer #5 · answered by nicegirl 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
the poetic world aint sappy b*****, don't give poets a bad wrap and the poem is not half bad........if u are 9 yrs old.
2006-07-11 05:04:59 · answer #6 · answered by Balthazar 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
it's nice, you must really be in love because people say that when you're truely in love it brings out the poet in people. im really happy for you.
2006-07-11 05:06:03 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
the poem good, i think it is the 1st love for u
2006-07-11 05:05:31 · answer #8 · answered by thivya_narayanan t 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Sappy but cute. Doubtless, meaningful to you... If she loves you back.. also meaningful for her too.
2006-07-11 05:07:06 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
its kinda cheesy..not to mention your grammar and you've misspelled..what seems to be mysterious? umm kind of repetitive..but overall very cute
2006-07-11 05:03:37 · answer #10 · answered by Peperrostix S 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋