i wrote this for me and my girlfriend. Tell me what you think, be honest, and no stupid answers please!
~~~True Luv~~~
Love could be short, love could last long,
But just remember, love is anything but wrong.
Love with truth, love with trust,
But never love with just pure lust.
Twards them, dont be shy, and dont ever lie,
around them, dont be afraid to cry.
Dont ever say you love, if you know you don't,
If you think that relationship will last, trust me, it won't.
Their arms are always reserved for you,
they are you love, that one, your boo.
Don't ever doubt them, and they don't want to be cheated,
If its a true love, then that way, they shouldn't be treated.
They will alwasy be there for you, and love you no matter what,
so they will still love you, not matter what you thought.
If it is true love, then for them you really care,
This is the Love, that Angel and Lizzie Share.
~Written By
-Angel
2006-07-10 14:49:35 · 6 answers · asked by Angel E 2 in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
I really like that poem,, and it could be applied to many couples in love [just change the last two names!]. If it is okay with you, I would really like to put it on my web page! Email me =^]
2006-07-10 15:06:04 · answer #1 · answered by fight for love 2 · 6⤊ 2⤋
HEy!!!
Hmmmmm.........
What can I say....Actualy upon reading your poem, i get through a lot of confusions,,,why? coz what you wrote doesn't reflect to the idea that you intended to give,,,it is a love poem for your gf right??? But there are a couple of lines that portraits negative side of love....kasi naman poh....writing a poem is not a matter of putting words together with rhyme it is a matter of what do you really wants to show...the meaning and thought I guess.....mejo.......magulo db........
2006-07-10 22:06:32 · answer #2 · answered by astyler 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I really like this. As a published poet, and I have to say this is really good. Your girlfriend should feel loved! I wish the two of you best of luck.
2006-07-10 21:57:17 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Its not the greatest poem I've ever heard, but its very cute.
2006-07-10 21:54:13 · answer #4 · answered by ♫ 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
That is very sweet. Lovely words for your girlfriend.
2006-07-10 21:53:40 · answer #5 · answered by Cheryl K 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
That poem was good, it was tight, keep it up.
2006-07-10 22:01:40 · answer #6 · answered by kiki0204 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋