here a poem asking for faith by lover , did you liked it ?

Question

YOU CAN BE INFORMAL WITH ME
your size, your height, your sides,
who you are?
your past, your dead life,
who you were?
it doesn’t mater to me.

I have seen a door,
hidden in your eyes,
can you hear bell ringing?
its me on the door,
stop watching me from eyehole.

don't ask for tea,
you can be informal with me,
your cloths are tight,
I can see delight in your eyes,
I know whats happening inside.

let tears fall from eyes,
they are safe with me,
drop your cloths,
relax your voice,
you have beautiful inside.

I know your lips,
do you know mine?
don't hesitate, ask more,
add feathers to your mind,
fly high, climb heights.

falling will not hurt,
with me by your side,
east, west, north, south,
nothing wrong ,nothing right,
you can be informal with me.

this poem is written by me .

Answer 1

I LOVE IT!!! Screw anyone that says otherwise!!!
I think, that it is really in depth and emotional. Do you really have these feelings torwards someone, or are you just creating fiction? Either way it's really good, and the symbolism is excellent!! I can feel everything the poem was meant to be felt.

Send me another @ [e-mail], or just email me!!!

Answer 2

its really good but underneath i think u have a bit more than poem meking in ur mind. but other then that that was pretty good
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Answer 3

I believe correct english would be (Did you like it) as you can't liked something if it is the subject...

Answer 4

to much to read. i needed a few points thanx

Answer 5

Very nice~*

Answer 6

corny

Answer 7

its pretty, fix you spelling though