A rose symbols the intensity of my emotions
A rose that’s ready to blossom
Planted from a heart that’s full of desire
A touch of intimacy
From my only admirer
This lust that I tend to grasp
Will grow from our connection
Looking into the eyes of thee,
I see his love perception
Let love take its place
Combine us heart to heart
And other prospective
Lead our love to a start
Thy rose will grow stronger
Our love will only expand
My heart ponders with every
Sensual touch of your gentle hand
Your love makes me want to faint
But still I stand
Try not to get to attached
To a love that wont forever last
The rose yet will blossom but will die
As time will pass
2006-07-09 11:02:36 · 9 answers · asked by Tbaby 3 in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
masterpeice , brilliant , its facinating see how you are abe to build the word web . a truely inspring poem .
the ideas and the TRUTH are expressed so beautifully that while one reads the words melts in ears and give soothing effect.once again hatsoff to you .
2006-07-09 11:20:10 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Beautiful with a lot of heart and soul.
2006-07-09 18:06:41 · answer #2 · answered by toughguy2 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
That's a beautiful poem
2006-07-09 18:08:30 · answer #3 · answered by Jillypooh 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Liked your poem. It was really good.
2006-07-09 18:10:45 · answer #4 · answered by little district girl 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
That's great, you should submit it to poetry.com
2006-07-09 18:08:40 · answer #5 · answered by ♥Ms. Heart♥ 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
itz ttly P.I.M.P. but you put it in the wrong category.
2006-07-09 18:08:58 · answer #6 · answered by 707bayboy4life 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
dats pretty good
2006-07-09 18:06:41 · answer #7 · answered by sam g 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
no, it won't die . love blossom forever .
great poem . thanks.
2006-07-09 18:08:57 · answer #8 · answered by horras 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
pimp
2006-07-09 18:06:06 · answer #9 · answered by nathan_96025 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋