When I study your eyes,
your face,
your body,
special ideas float into my mind.
I feel closer to you each day,
and foresee our love growing greater in every way,
until one day when our love is pure, total, and unconditional,
in your mind and mine,
we will be together -
together to the end of time.
From our step, time steals the spring;
Its solemn goal: take everything.
But you, my dear, escaped its lot;
Your radiant beauty fadth not.
Of joys once known and pleasures proved,
Heart's memry's fixed, and is not moved.
Across the years, I see your face,
Your cheeks aglow, your lasting grace.
Tho sight and sound do soon depart,
Your light stays bright within my heart,
And when I cross the bar at last,
Within my soul and firmly fast
Will be your smile, your twinkling eyes,
A vision fixed, without demise.
2006-07-08 05:10:08 · 11 answers · asked by Anonymous in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
Your poems are very beautiful.You should seriously consider publishing them,so no one can steal them from you and say that they wrote it.
2006-07-08 06:06:29 · answer #1 · answered by snowtiger151 2 · 7⤊ 4⤋
They are very nice and show emotion, you can enter them into online contest at poems.com. Try it because you do reflect a talent
2006-07-08 05:15:03 · answer #2 · answered by dmxdragon2 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Very nice I really liked them did you right them let me know at ditzhitz@yahoo.com ill share some of mine with you.
2006-07-08 05:13:37 · answer #3 · answered by ditzhitz 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Hope they are not copyrighter cause I am copying them.... hahahahhahahahahah
they are good
2006-07-08 05:13:31 · answer #4 · answered by boygenis 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
those are really really good! if you wanna read some of mine email me at girlie_racer10@yahoo.com or IM me!
2006-07-08 05:17:26 · answer #5 · answered by NC_baby_gurl 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Don't quit your day job!
2006-07-08 05:17:09 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Those are beautiful poems.
2006-07-08 05:16:35 · answer #7 · answered by Jillypooh 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
they're beautiful! if you did them, you ought to publish! you have talent, my friend.
2006-07-08 05:18:12 · answer #8 · answered by wannakno 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
that's brilliant. you are one talented person.. bravo...
2006-07-08 05:24:08 · answer #9 · answered by Honey Gee 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
nice if they are your's you are good
2006-07-08 05:17:26 · answer #10 · answered by andrei_bozo 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋