When I Call You My Friend
When I call you my friend.
It means you listen to me.
When I call you my friend
it means I Trust You
When I call you my friend
It means I can call you at 2:00 in the moring and you will listen to my problems
When I Call you my Friend
It means I can tell you my Secerts
When I call You my Friend
It means i have a shoulder to cry on.
when I call you my friend
It means i have someone to make me laugh
when I call you my friend
It means we are friends forever and we are sisters for life
2006-07-07 15:13:06 · 13 answers · asked by Anonymous in Education & Reference ➔ Other - Education
Don't say "when I call you my friend" so many times, maybe just at the beginning and the end.
2006-07-07 15:16:29 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I think it's nice. It's kinda like a photo of my little girl. You might say "oh, she's cute" and be done with it. But I can look at my little girl's photo all day because she means so much for me.
For whoever gets it that it's intended for, it'll be a favorite poem, but other people that aren't as connected to it will say "oh that's nice".
To the person it's meant for it'll mean more than to anyone else...
2006-07-07 15:18:06 · answer #2 · answered by austin_long 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's nice and has a lot of thought, but at the last of it, you should've made it people friendly, because not all friendships have girls in them. My 2nd best friend is a guy so I can't say "we will be sisters for life," because he's not a girl. But keep it up.
2006-07-07 15:18:32 · answer #3 · answered by Friendly 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Well I like It! it is pretty good! I write poetry alos! Maybe we need to exchange some! O and I like this saying! A friend will come bail you out of Jail and i true friend will sit there and tell you We F***** Up!
2006-07-07 15:17:39 · answer #4 · answered by Ashton's Mommy 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Is awful man! Next time try to write an equation. Sound better.
2006-07-07 15:17:49 · answer #5 · answered by babelup 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's not very good, I am afraid! Keep practicing though, you'll get better! Try to read a lot too.
2006-07-07 15:59:23 · answer #6 · answered by nkdtb 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Nice, but maybe you should go on to say what happens when she call you her friend.
2006-07-07 15:16:45 · answer #7 · answered by meathead76 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's a awsome poem marcy i'm surprised you could write such a good poem! xD
2006-07-07 18:46:06 · answer #8 · answered by We Can Make The Night Last 4Ever 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
rewrite it till it rhymes if you like it. it is a bad idea though. maybe you should go swimming.
2006-07-07 15:18:51 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I think its pretty good, although you should add other words so it won't be so many repeats.
2006-07-07 15:19:17 · answer #10 · answered by live_laugh_and learn something 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋