This rose is made of paper,
A fact thats sad but true.
It will never have that lovely smell,
The way real roses do.
It will never get its water from the early morning dew,
But it will always be watered with tears I cry for you.
You see, this isn't just a piece of art,
This very rose grew straight from my heart.
Its filled with love and thoughts of our past,
and like our love it was made to last.
And so to you a special gift I've chose,
I'm sending you a paper Rose~
2006-07-06 08:25:40 · 9 answers · asked by Led*Zep*Babe 5 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Other - Arts & Humanities
I like it. You wrote it?
2006-07-06 08:28:12 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Your paper rose fragrance smell is similar to real rose , thank you for your gesture and special gift to everyone, keep watering.
what about the next color, this time I received the Blue Rose
2006-07-06 15:38:35 · answer #2 · answered by Kgs 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Honestly?Well I think the beginning is great but then when you get to the line about the paper coming from your heart,it loses a little something. The beginning is awesome though.â¥
2006-07-06 15:29:53 · answer #3 · answered by bamahotT 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Very good. If this was an original composition you are very talented.
2006-07-06 15:29:04 · answer #4 · answered by dcbowls 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Good start but keep working at it
2006-07-06 15:30:08 · answer #5 · answered by gamerunner2001 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Very nice.
2006-07-06 15:28:45 · answer #6 · answered by Manrolls 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
That is very cute, you have alot of talent
2006-07-06 15:29:52 · answer #7 · answered by anna 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
cool
2006-07-06 15:27:37 · answer #8 · answered by Velociraptor 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
love it.
2006-07-06 15:29:33 · answer #9 · answered by tiffany228 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋