I am writing a letting to a vets office to see if they have any jobs avalible for me and I can't figure out how to end this letter:
Dear Androscoggin Animal Hospital,
I am a 14 year old honer roll student that loves animals and I was wondering if you have any jobs avalible such as cleaning that I could have. I would be able to work any days around my school schedule. ???????????????????????
2006-07-06
02:24:06
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and please inform me of any misspellings i made
2006-07-06
02:24:27 ·
update #1
I just edited it a little so now it says:
Dear Androscoggin Animal Hospital,
I am a 14 year old honer roll student that loves animals and I was wondering if you have any jobs avalible for me such as cleaning and restocking. I would be able to work any days around my school schedule.
2006-07-06
02:26:06 ·
update #2
Here is what I just revised
Dear Androscoggin Animal Hospital,
I am a 14 year old honor roll student that loves animals and I was wondering if you have any jobs available for me along the lines of cleaning, restocking, keeping the animals exercised, etc. I would be able to work at any time during the summer and once school starts any times that are not during school hours. I look forward to hearing from you. You can contact me through email or call me at ########.
Sincerly,
Mallori Manson
In case your wondering, I just put #### for my phone number on here so a bunch of people dont get my phone number, I accually I have the real number on the acual letter
2006-07-06
02:45:56 ·
update #3
Its accually an email
2006-07-06
02:49:35 ·
update #4
I look forward to hearing from you at (phone number) or (email address).
Thank you for your time,
(name)
2006-07-06 02:28:17
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answered by Anonymous
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Dear Mallori Manson - I have gone through replies given by nice persons. These were verygood - but I liked your final drafting which was as under:
"Dear Androscoggin Animal Hospital,
I am a 14 year old honor roll student that loves animals and I was wondering if you have any jobs available for me along the lines of cleaning, restocking, keeping the animals exercised, etc. I would be able to work at any time during the summer and once school starts any times that are not during school hours. I look forward to hearing from you. You can contact me through email or call me at ########.
Sincerly,
Mallori Manson"
Pray to God and send it.
2006-07-12 23:40:04
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answered by PK LAMBA 6
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The date.
Your address and phone number.
Their address
Dear Androscoggin Animal Hospital;
I am a 14 year old honor roll student that loves animals. I would like to apply for a job such a as cleaning or caring for the animals. I am available for work any day of the week except for the times that I am at school. I look forward to your reply.
Sincerely,
Your name here.
2006-07-06 02:48:34
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answered by Anonymous
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Dear (Get someones name),
I am a 14 year old honer roll student that loves animals and I was wondering if you have any jobs or volunteer opportunities available. I am interested in becoming a Veterinarian and would appreciate the opportunity to learn more about the field. I would be able to work any days around my school schedule.
Thank you for your time and consideration. I look forward to hearing from you.
Sincerely,
Your Name
At 14 they probably won't have a paying job for you but you can be a volunteer.
Good Luck.
2006-07-06 02:31:52
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answered by Sensei Rob 4
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Dear Androscoggin Animal Hospital:
I am a 14 year old honor roll student who is hard working and loves animals. I am interested in working in any capacity within the veterinary field. Should you have any jobs available such as cleaning, restocking, etc., please contact me. My hours are flexible, as I am able to work around my school schedule.
I can be reached at (***-***-****), or by e-mail ***************. Thank you for your consideration. I look forward to hearing from you.
Sincerely,
I hope this helps. honor and available were spelled incorrectly. Good luck.
2006-07-06 02:39:56
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answered by leahcutie 4
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Dear......
I am a 14 year old honor roll student who loves animals. Is it possible that you have an available position for the summer that could extend during the school semester? I would be willing to work around my school responsibilities.
Thank you for your kind consideration,
Sincerely......
2006-07-06 02:33:29
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answered by banker lady 3
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Dear AAH,
I am a 14-year old Honors student at Washougal High School. I think i would like to pursue a career in veterinary services, but need an opportunity to check this out.
Is there an job opening there for a person who is bright and energetic and will to learn? I would be able to work [insert times that you are willing to work], if that is amenable to you.
If possible, I'd like to come down so we could have a face-to-face discussion on this. Thank you for your time and consideration and i hope to hear from you shortly.
(Do keep in mind that at 14, you may not be legally allowed to work. best of luck to you anyway)
2006-07-06 02:31:50
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answered by Anonymous
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During the summer break, I am available at any time, and I would be willing to work for you on a trial basis, without pay, for a week. Please consider my request seriously, and call me so I can come "try out" for the job.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Sincerely yours,
2006-07-06 02:31:54
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answered by Zelda Hunter 7
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You can give them the hours you are available... if you can't get a job there, you may want to walk dogs for people around your neighborhood.
Also, you need your working papers from school...
2006-07-06 02:29:16
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answered by Anonymous
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you forgot a coma after available!
Another possibility to end the letter:
If you need further information about me, then do not hesitate to ask under (tel. or e-mail).
Looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely
2006-07-06 02:32:46
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answered by bumblebee 2
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Forget the letter. Apply in person. If they are not hiring now, ask to leave an application, then go back and ask again in a month or so.
2006-07-06 02:35:07
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answered by PanamaJack 2
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