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i need to make an introduction for my english portfolio due tomorrow.. can anyone help me improve these paragraphs? you can also make a new one but with the same thought.. i really appreciate it.. thanks..

This portfolio is filled with outputs that contribute to the English learning process we students take. The activities here include revised poems, reactions to a certain poem and our own stories. It includes my own style of writing as I attempt master the art of writing.

As you continue to flip through the pages of my collection you will witness the hard work and compassion displayed in all my projects. My dedication to the making of this projects and outputs has caused my talents and skill to be developed and is now fully improved.

2006-07-06 01:44:49 · 11 answers · asked by Anonymous in Education & Reference Homework Help

please don't say this is fine.. it's not mine.. actually, it's half mine.. i made the half and my friend mande the other.. and now, i did a new one.. because my frined is the using this for her portfolio..

2006-07-06 01:51:58 · update #1

don'tjust corect the grammer please... i need paraphrasing!.. huhu

2006-07-06 01:55:00 · update #2

11 answers

I think it sounds good, just the way that it is.


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2006-07-06 01:49:35 · answer #1 · answered by mikemadie 4 · 0 0

Compiled in this portfolio are writings that have contributed to the English learning process which we have currently been studying. Included within are activities such as revised poems, reactions to a certain poem, plus my (if it is only your writings in this portfolio, if other students works are in this portfolio than by all means use our) own stories, which as you will see is wrtten in a style all my own as I attempt to master the art of writing.

Thoughout these pages you will witness the hard work and dedication I have taken with my collection and I hope you will see the compassion displayed in all my projects. Creating these works have helped me to develope my talent and skill in improving my knowledge of the English language.


This is just my ideas. I would use the word writings or works instead of output. I hope this has helped you in any way or has given you another way to look at the way you can present and introduction.

2006-07-06 09:32:22 · answer #2 · answered by M360 3 · 0 0

This portfolio is filled with various outputs that contribute to the English learning process we students undertake. The portfolio includes my own revisions of poems, my thoughts and reactions to one of the poems and also some of the Students own stories. Whilst attempting to master the art of writing, I have also attempted to further develop my own particular style of writing.

As you flip through the pages of my collection you will, hopefully, witness and appreciate all the hard work and dedication that has gone into its creation. I truely believe that all the long hours and effort that has gone into this project has been very beneficial in further developing my writing and English language talents.

2006-07-06 09:15:32 · answer #3 · answered by Steve T 2 · 0 0

This portfolio contains many outputs that contribute to the English learning process that we students have undertaken. The activities here include revised poems, reactions to one certain poem and our own stories. It includes many of my own pieces, which demonstrate my own style as I attempt to master the art of writing.

As you continue to flip through the pages of this collection you will witness the hard work and passion displayed in all my projects. My dedication to the compilation of this project and its outputs has caused my talent and skill to more fully develop and improve.

2006-07-06 08:55:00 · answer #4 · answered by CTB 1 · 0 0

This portfolio is comprised of outputs which contribute towards developing the learning process of the student of English. The contents include revised poems, reactions to a particular poem and our own pieces of creative writing. These demonstrate my own individual style of writing as I develop my skills in the art of prose.

As you progress through the pages of my collection you will be able to recognise the passion and dedication I feel to each project. My commitment to the creation of this anthology [a collection of eng lit works] has helped to develop my talent and skill in the subject.

Hope this can be of some use hon!!

2006-07-06 15:06:42 · answer #5 · answered by bertha 2 · 0 0

In this portfolio you will find many examples of the current English learning process. Included are our own stories, revised poems and the written reactions to those poems. I include my own writing style in my attempt to master the art of writing.

As you progress through this portfolio, I would like for you to notice the compassion and dedication displayed in my works. I have seen my talents evolve with the making of this project and appreciate the opportunity to share it with you.


Don't use this word for word because it won't sound like you or anything you have written. This is just an example of how I would phrase it.

Good Luck

2006-07-06 09:01:39 · answer #6 · answered by Sensei Rob 4 · 0 0

Wow, um grammer is a good thing.... Here are some corrections

As one flips through the pages of my collection one can witness the hard work and compassion displayed in all of my projects. My dedication to the making of this project has caused my talent and writting skills to develop and improve.

2006-07-06 08:50:32 · answer #7 · answered by robbet03 6 · 0 0

With this portfolio I hope to demonstrate the results of the education in English I, and other students, have taken. Included are examples of my own writing and reactions to that of others. It is my hope that the hard work and dedication I've put into the completion of these projects will be fully reflected in the finished works.

2006-07-06 08:56:32 · answer #8 · answered by rich k 6 · 0 0

You wrote "My dedication to the making of this projects and outputs has caused my talents and skill to be developed and is now fully improved."

I would only change "My dedication to the making of (these) projects and outputs has caused my talents and skill(s) to become developed and (are) now fully improved.

2006-07-06 08:53:07 · answer #9 · answered by Aaron R 3 · 0 0

I think it's enough & good too.

2006-07-06 08:51:09 · answer #10 · answered by Mahyar 3 · 0 0

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