U see I loved 'hard' once but the love wasn't returned. I found out the man I'd die for, he wasn't even concerned. In time it turned. He tried to burn me like a perm. Although my eyes saw the deception my heart wouldn't let me learn. From um, some dumb woman was I & everytime he'd lie, he would cry & inside I'd die. My heart must have cried a thousand deaths. Compared myself to Toni Braxton. Thought I'd never catch my breath. Nothing left, he stole the heart beating from my chest. I tried to call the cops, but that type of thief they can't arrest. Pain supressed, will lead 2 cardiac arrest. Diamonds deserve diamonds but he convinced me I was worth less. When my peoples would protest, I told them mind their business, cause my sh*t was complex. More than just the sex. I was blessed, and couldn't feel it like when I was caressed. I spent nights cutching my breast overwhelmed by GOD's test. I was GOD's best contemplating death with a Gillette. But no man is ever worth the paradise MANIFEST
2006-07-01 23:57:21 · 5 answers · asked by AdbA 1 in Social Science ➔ Gender Studies
keep on writing it'll help you heal,also go do something nice for yourself...
I think every woman, perhaps man too can relate to at least one line.Sometimes love just stinks,and your right nobody is worth NoBody is worth death!!
Good Luck&Stay Strong:)
2006-07-08 11:26:15 · answer #1 · answered by Andrea H 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Your pain comes through loud and clear. I hope your pain has subsided and you are ready again to try for love. It is a continously growing adventure. You learn, you feel, you go down the roads that you chose to travel, and eventually, God's willing and the creek don't rise, you will get to where you were always meant to be.
2006-07-02 03:11:33 · answer #2 · answered by ldylopes 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I really liked it. I am seeing that you write your feelings through songs or poetry and that's really nice because you open your heart really wide and showed whats going on and how you feel and how you felt.
2006-07-04 20:44:37 · answer #3 · answered by Hotmom1216 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Keep writing, I like it and I can see that you have a lot of potential in writing. You will become very good at it if you keep at it!
2006-07-02 00:06:07 · answer #4 · answered by zelin 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
WUT??????
(By the way, if you were tryna rap, den DAT SUCKS n it's kinda gay)
2006-07-02 00:04:28 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋