Today is the day that you will change
Everyone else is on a different page
And the only thing that can hurt you
Is yourself
Deep down inside you see black or gold
Inside of you are so many stories untold
One day you like this
The next day you don’t
There’ll be things you miss
And things you won’t
And every other time
You’ll want to change you mind
Seeing what you are today
We can’t decide
If you’ll always stay this way
Or if there’s a new path you will find
Chorus
Today is just another day
Different things will come your way
We can’t say what you are
We can’t say what you’re not
Can’t say if you’ll go far
Or stay in this spot
Yesterday is just a memory
Tomorrow is something no one can see
And the only thing I can say
Is no one can label you or me
2006-07-01 22:49:50 · 8 answers · asked by ♥ The One You Love To Hate♥ 7 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Music
You can’t say where you’ll end up tomorrow
You can lead your own group or ending up to follow
And the only thing that will hurt you
Is yourself
You can say what you’ll become but you’ll only be guessin’
Learning new ways and learning an old lesson
One day they like you
The next day don’t
Some that you’ll hate too
And others you won’t
Who are you friends
You can’t decide
But the ones that aren’t
You’ll leave behind
Repeat chorus
Some people need to practice what they preach
That some things you were taught you just can’t reach
That maybe something is new to you
Well sweetie there’s nothing you can do
You think that you’re something more
And you’ve changed from what you were before
Repeat chorus
i know it needs a few adjustments please help me tell me what you think
check ya later ♥
2006-07-01 22:50:17 · update #1
okay the lyrics what do you think about the lyrics sorry lol
2006-07-01 22:55:36 · update #2
Wow. those are some good lyrics.I write poems and songs too. I never really set them to melody. My friends are in a metal/punk band and we tried to set one of them to music. We kind of gave up on it but I keep writing lyrics. My songs are heavier sound-wise. But yours is beautiful. Wonderfully written.
2006-07-02 02:10:16 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 12⤊ 7⤋
The first two lines confuse me
And the churos does not support the first two lines
When writing a song the first line or two are very important - they introduce the song or at least start the journey - and the chorus has to be a bit more catchy
My advise is figure out what you want to say so the audience understands it. and keep it simple.
Check one of mine out
2006-07-02 06:02:34 · answer #2 · answered by TBor ROCKS 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
it seems as a very good song i just wish i knew what melody and tone you sing it on so i could here it in my mind but the words are good maybe a few adjustments here and there
2006-07-02 05:53:09 · answer #3 · answered by Cj D 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Hard to say if it's good or not, not knowing the melody. The lyrics are ok though.
2006-07-02 05:54:30 · answer #4 · answered by Greg 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's great girl. Just sing it outloud to yourself and the adjustments will write themselves, If you believe in what ya sayin'
2006-07-02 05:58:04 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
i think its goood!! i mean the lyrics are nice and interesting bt i dont know the melody! will u remember me when u become famous?!
2006-07-02 06:35:09 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
the first version is good rather than the second one... good luck
2006-07-02 05:55:24 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Its really very good.....you are a good lyricist it seems....carry on.Lovely song!!!
Wow!!!
2006-07-02 05:57:15 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋