My whole life,
Have I sought.
And every time,
Has come to naught.
I seek a girl,
A girl to love.
A girl,
To call my dove.
I look hard,
I look long.
And yes,
My feelings are strong.
I may never,
find her,
maybe meeting,
will never occur.
2006-07-01 14:35:29 · 14 answers · asked by Sammy Hagar 3 in Society & Culture ➔ Other - Society & Culture
Oh...that's so sweet,well you know I'm single and nineteen years old.
2006-07-01 14:39:39 · answer #1 · answered by JOCELYN Y 1 · 8⤊ 6⤋
This is really sweet. The next time you meet a girl you like and don't know what to talk about, tell her this. She will be interrested if she likes you and want you to write some more. Good luck.
2006-07-01 21:41:01 · answer #2 · answered by noseygirl 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
the "rhymy" hallmark stuff doesnt really do it for me, now real poets like Pablo Neruda, thats some good stuff.
err, sorry probably would turn me off if you tried to swoon me with it, unless youre reallllllllllllly good looking, and then still im not sure youde be marriage material, no offense, rhyming poetry is just so, lame.
2006-07-01 21:42:19 · answer #3 · answered by really? 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I have also been seeking, during my entire life... but came across fake friends, teasing liars, cheaters and weak characters or cowards.
I may never find true love,... there was one and it was lost and there may be no other... and I don't even want love, any more... nice to read your poetry, but it doesn't help..... :(
2006-07-02 07:01:21 · answer #4 · answered by Hibernating Ladybird 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Where are you looking to meet this girl??? Do you want a girl or a woman??? There is a difference. Good Luck.
2006-07-01 21:39:35 · answer #5 · answered by winona e 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Still searching for the right "girl" huh? ........here's a quick one for you.....
My man is love,
He is no dove,
His hands excite,
With each fluttering move.
Like a butterfly on wing......
Without a sound..
His sigh of relief
Along with a smile,
A hardened heart broke in half
By simple gestures beyond compare.
I will always love my man,
Because he is no boy.
I want him to know
That I really love him but,
We will never be as one,
Until he sings my name,
While I whisper softly in his ear
The words he longs to hear,
I love you forever SKJR...
This man is one of love,
Perhaps he is a dove.
The whiteness of his cloth,
Shining into my eyes
Told me how he wishes to please
The one he loves,
It's twilight time darling,
It's time to sit and pray
That we will be together
To share our love soon.....
......
2006-07-01 23:38:53 · answer #6 · answered by ? 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I feel ya man. Simple and elegant. It shows how you feel, and unlike some poetry, I can understand it. Two thumbs up.
2006-07-01 21:38:42 · answer #7 · answered by Andrew H 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Put down the pen and pickup the phone.
You will feel exhilarated.
"ph" the pharmacist!
2006-07-01 21:38:30 · answer #8 · answered by Cipro 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
usually i hate poetry cuz it makes me feel depressed. but thats
reely good.
2006-07-01 21:39:27 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
i think u r seeking in the wrong place ;-)
2006-07-01 21:39:49 · answer #10 · answered by othello11111 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I think that poetry is lame.
2006-07-01 21:38:30 · answer #11 · answered by heterophobicgirl 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋