We've none each other for a long time; and boy hasn't life gone by.
I like seeing u even if its for a while; because u always find away of making me smile.
I know its easy and 4 u not a task; but when I hang out with u I have a blast.
I don't know if its love or if I am just having a crush; but this is a feeling I just can't brush.
Your dark brown eyes your even nice tan; I like it all I am your #1 fan.
Looking into your eyes I get so abused; do u like me or not I am so confused!
what do u think?? i know its not the best but i am only 14.....if u have better idea's plez tell me...or just leave what u think! thanx!
2006-06-28 17:12:33 · 12 answers · asked by basketball_freak72 2 in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
that's cool. im 14 too. i dont particularly like poetyr, but if thats your way of doing it. i write music instead.
2006-06-28 17:15:37 · answer #1 · answered by j 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
well i have to be honest and say i dont think its the best poem i've heard. it sounds like it was difficult for u to do it cuz u decided to use words that didnt really make that much sense. u seemed to be only concerned about making it rhyme. a poem doesnt necessarily have to rhyme. i think that the best poems are the ones that are deep, and u should try to make it that way. just try to sit down and picture the feelings that u get when ur near him, his importance in ur life all those sorts of things. (i'd read some good poems for referance)
but dont worry u still got enough time to practice if u plan to be a poet someday :)
2006-06-29 00:48:27 · answer #2 · answered by sweetness_n_passion 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
We've known
long time,
for awhile,
find a way
it's easy and 4 u not a task-doesn't make sense
task,
crush,
brown eyes and your nice tan,
do you like me or not?
2006-06-29 00:22:39 · answer #3 · answered by Jen 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i'm 14 and i have to say that is way better than any poem i could ever come up with! it's great, i think any caring guy would love it!
2006-06-29 00:17:23 · answer #4 · answered by ezza_rules 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i'm 15, but i don't know much about love, boys, etc. My friends always talk about that. but i think your poem is great. i can't make something like that
2006-06-29 00:21:39 · answer #5 · answered by ais 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
For someone who's 14, I think the poem is very cute and you should be proud of it !!!!
Thank you for sharing it.
2006-06-29 00:17:17 · answer #6 · answered by quiet times 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
That is very cute! I'm 28 and going through the same thing. MEN.. can't live with em', can't live without em'!
2006-06-29 00:18:22 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Keep up the good work. Writing poetry can be fun and you can use your talent to good use.
2006-06-29 00:18:22 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
wow i say can you say not cool? copy one from the comp cause that blows!
2006-06-29 00:16:04 · answer #9 · answered by kaycee 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
dats so sweet
2006-06-29 00:26:30 · answer #10 · answered by honeyonthesquarehigh 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋