Please help me finished my haiku. I can't find the right word on the blank. Haiku should be 5-7-5 syllables. I want it something hot and romantic, and please help me check my gramar, too. Thanks!
"___________dreams of you
Awakens my frozen dreams
Quench my thirsty soul"
2006-06-27 13:42:54 · 7 answers · asked by ? 1 in Education & Reference ➔ Quotations
Restless or Peaceful; I am not sure what the point to your haiku is though. But I love it! Very deep. Grammer seems fine!
2006-06-27 13:47:54 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 2⤊ 1⤋
I saw the winner of a haiku contest I really liked, it went something like
Writing Haiku is
Really easy. Just stop at
the seventeenth syl--
2006-06-27 14:21:57 · answer #2 · answered by cdf-rom 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Also, I would change the first "dreams" to something else - "thoughts" maybe - because you also use dreams in the very next line.
Burning thoughts of you
Awakens my frozen dreams
Quench my thirsy soul
2006-06-27 17:50:42 · answer #3 · answered by mommyjo2 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Breathless
or
Fervent
or
Torrid
or
Blissful
or
Endless
or
Lovely
and I agree...change Awakens to awaken....and dreams to mind...it makes more sense that way!
2006-06-27 16:10:47 · answer #4 · answered by Lynell S 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Torrid, blissful, joyous, flighty, temptuous
2006-06-27 16:29:00 · answer #5 · answered by purplewindow 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Lucid
and i would change awakens into awaken.....and dreams into mind
but that's just me...
2006-06-27 13:50:14 · answer #6 · answered by retard 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I have
2006-06-27 13:46:05 · answer #7 · answered by Kitkat Bar 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋