One: Where is the place that you offer your employees who are poor and not from here to stay?
Two: Where is the place that you offer your employees to stay who are poor and not from here ?
2006-06-26 19:58:57 · 12 answers · asked by donotmisstony 2 in Society & Culture ➔ Languages
I would use the first, but with commas like so.
Where is the place that you offer your employees, who are poor and not from here, to stay?
2006-06-27 02:48:02 · answer #1 · answered by JustAskMe 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I don't think that you can properly ask this question on one part.
try it in two parts.
When you have employees that are poor, and not from around here, do you offer them a place to stay? and, If so, where?
2006-06-26 20:07:02 · answer #2 · answered by Michael L 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
This is not an educated answer as I dont actually have any employees but i would say offer them to stay at your place, you said they were poor, its the cheapest option for them and you could show them around and get them used to the place. If you dont like that idea, send them to homeswest or your mother in laws!
2006-06-26 20:08:19 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
The real answer is to break it up to make more sense of it.
This business offers a place for employees who are poor and not local to stay. Where is it?
2006-06-26 20:03:28 · answer #4 · answered by anaretaacronycal 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Structure your sentences so that these words do not show up and they will always sound correct:
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An employee of mine needs a place to stay, he/she does not have a lot of financial resources. Where can they stay?
2006-06-26 20:09:41 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Neither are really right. It would be better to say:
"Where is the residence that you provide for your poor, foreign employees?
2006-06-27 09:57:17 · answer #6 · answered by manorris3265 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Two
2006-06-26 20:03:04 · answer #7 · answered by Darkmist 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I'd change it slightly...
What accommodation do you offer to both your poorer, and, migrant employees?
2006-06-26 23:44:10 · answer #8 · answered by Carry On..! 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
both are too lengthy, why not try....where do your poorer and foreign employees stay?
2006-06-26 20:21:28 · answer #9 · answered by 【ツ】ρεαcε! 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
both r right, but i think the second one sounds better :)
2006-06-26 20:02:33 · answer #10 · answered by Irwinutzski 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋