confusion at its best. The truth lies in this. Im
closer to nothing then ive ever been. the horrible
reality is, i dont really exist. to find out the
correct answer is true bliss. just dont blink or you
might miss. Just what you learn to regret. and dont
keep looking for it or you will start to stress. life
comes like a puzzle, a total mess. Take your time, it
all fits.
Tell me how the poem makes u feel. im looking for some feed back. I wrote this about 5 years ago and never showed anyone....
2006-06-25 21:40:48 · 10 answers · asked by perfect_demise 2 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Jokes & Riddles
Your poem to me seems that your life began hard and still is hard but your not going to let the bad win in the end
2006-06-27 19:35:13 · answer #1 · answered by justthe2ofusjs 1 · 2⤊ 0⤋
You did a wise thing for past five years but why did you change it all of a sudden. Better dont show it to any one !!!
Just kidding.
You did a wise thing five years before But we are able to see its light only now. Refine it Produce many more Best of luck.
2006-06-26 06:23:39 · answer #2 · answered by THATHA75 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's pretty good...............It would be good as a lyric for a rock song, more then a poem, I think. And it IS Faint........... don't listen to the person who told you it's feint............. feint is not even a word.
2006-06-26 04:43:47 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Did u really wrote urself..........i tell u this is too good.
One more thing, what made u share this, when u really didnt wanted to.
Cheers!!!
2006-06-26 05:24:42 · answer #4 · answered by Gits 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Cool, why did you hide it for this long, i could have been a song by now. tight kid, poem was tight.
2006-06-26 07:11:53 · answer #5 · answered by Gee 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Awesome! :)
thxforsharing
2006-06-26 04:47:28 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like it....it is thought provoking.....thanks for sharing...
2006-06-26 06:34:09 · answer #7 · answered by marie l 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's "feint" not "faint"
2006-06-26 04:42:40 · answer #8 · answered by Killingme 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
goood
2006-06-26 04:57:55 · answer #9 · answered by atimsa 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Thanks for sharing to all of us
2006-06-26 04:58:05 · answer #10 · answered by Pd 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋