Can I separate a relative clause with the thing that I want to describe?

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Can I separate a relative clause with the thing that I want to describe?

For example: Where is the place that you offer your employees to stay who are poor and not from here?
Instead of saying: Where is the place that you offer your employees who are poor and not from here to stay.

2006-06-23 23:44:01 · 3 answers · asked by donotmisstony 2 in Society & Culture ➔ Languages

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Where is the accommodation you offer your poor, non-local employees?

2006-06-24 23:46:10 · answer #1 · answered by J9 6 · 2⤊ 0⤋

What lodging is available for your poor employees who live elsewhere?

2006-06-24 06:49:43 · answer #2 · answered by Muddy 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋

Please tell me where the accommodations are for your indigent employees who live at a distance.( I would change the sentence from interrogative to imperative to improve the syntax).

2006-06-24 06:59:23 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋