i just wrote this thinking about this girl.......should i send it to her.??
sometimes i listen to music and write and sometimes im swept away by minute after minute listening to your sweet voice when it's charmed enough to soften to that of an angel's song slowly playing through these headphones. i'd want your arms to be down by your side as my fingers slid down your shoulders and met your hands with a gentleness only provided from a heart full cautious wonder, yet ready to burst at the tips with each touch. where part of the earth did you land? ive seen girls, beautiful girls...but angels in disguise deserve not to be showing any interest in a poor boy who needs nothing but a simple love to hold on to and you still offer me the world ( in my eyes). but i cant take it, just give me kiss and stretch your lips until your smiling. i am.
2006-06-23 20:50:07 · 8 answers · asked by playaninstrument 3 in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
awwwww...yeah...
2006-06-24 14:48:00 · answer #1 · answered by itty 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
First of all you should make it sound right...definately send it to her. girls love this kind of stuff. you'll make her very happy. you write very well. As a poet myself, i am quite proud of you! Anyway, i edited it...you can use if you like...just copy and paste it. Good luck, baby!
sometimes i listen to music and write and sometimes im swept away minute after minute listening to your sweet voice when it's charmed enough, softened to that of an angel's song, slowly playing through these headphones. i'd want your arms to be down by your side as my fingers slide down your shoulders and met your hands with a gentleness only provided from a heart full cautious wonder, yet ready to burst at the seems with each touch. on what part of the earth did you land? i've seen girls, beautiful girls...but angels in disguise deserve not to show any interest in a poor boy who needs nothing but a simple love to hold on to, yet you still offer me the world ( in my eyes), but i cant take it. just just kiss me until your lips spead to smiling. because i am.
2006-06-24 03:53:18 · answer #2 · answered by FIREHAZARD 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
You got me with that one! I am a romantic and I would Definitely date you if you has said written or sun that to me I would definitely be yours Good luck not like you will need it though!
2006-06-24 04:02:14 · answer #3 · answered by Rachel M 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
yes! i wuv that! awww. i wish boys would do things like that to me. some girls might find that a bit intense but i would go for it!
2006-06-24 03:57:02 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
yes cuz u r special in so many ways
2006-06-24 03:53:26 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's verry romantic, if she's a romantic person she'll like it ......only you know her and only u can decide,,,,,,
2006-06-24 03:54:33 · answer #6 · answered by Anda-ad 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
yaeh show her how u fell
2006-06-24 03:52:17 · answer #7 · answered by luchadora 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
let her know
2006-06-24 03:53:30 · answer #8 · answered by tay-tay 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋