Which is correct?

Question

One: If you one day find out that you can't do what you want to do for a living, what will you do?
Two: If one day you find out that you can't do what you want to do for a living, what will you do?

Answer 1

both, I think you just need some commas

Answer 2

2

Answer 3

Two: If one day you find out that you can't do what you want to do for a living, what will you do?

Answer 4

In 1, the first "you" is redundant. Number 2 is better, but I would correct it to: If, one day, you find out that you can't do what you want for a living, what (then) will you do? (You could add the the "then" optionally for readability).

Answer 5

One

Answer 6

One: If you one day,find out that you can't do what you want to do for a living, what will you do?
Two: If one day you find out that you can't do what you want to do for a living, what will you do?

IN THE FIRST SENTENCE PUT A COMMA AFTER DAY
THEN IT IS OK
SECOND ONE IS PRECIOUSLY RIGHT.

Answer 7

I prefer the second, but with adverbial expressions like 'one day', you really have a lot of flexibility. My favourite would probably be 'If you find out one day that...'

Answer 8

Without the comma in place in the first, the second is proper, however if you add the comma after 'if' in the first it will be also.

Answer 9

try this: If you one day discovered that you cannot do what you wish for a living, what will you do?

Answer 10

Definitely two.

Answer 11

two