hey i've made a small poem on America read it and tell me how it is?

Question

America the bricks of your buildings are made of human bones,and the cement
is mixed with the blood of the innocent people whom you killed, you are the whore of the world
wicked people from all region have sex with you and enjoy yourimmorality,
America a place where virgins strip off shamelessly to entertain the world
and hypocrites act to be the followers of christ,
where married womans desperate to have sex with young blood
and looser womens give advice to teenage girls on how to get pregnant
where homosexuality is considered as gods gift and people only live for
sexual pleasure.Where satan worship is considered as fashion and the country
which has the maximum song of praising satan.
America the place where people are judged on their colour and beautiful
people are considered lucky..
Is this what Americans want in other countries.

Answer 1

beautiful...nice

Answer 2

This is just spreading hate. Does it make you feel better? Does it change anything? Why not focus on making the world a better place. Why not try to remember just as you are not responsible for everything that your country does in the global community neither are all Americans. Nor are you responsible for how every person in your country behaves just like the individuals in America. A lot of what you write here may be true for some but not all. Your hatred will only poison your own heart. It won't change others. Spread love and light up the world.
Love & Light
Sharon
One Planet = One People

Answer 3

I'm not sure if you don't undestand grammer or if you were raised in one of these countries you are talking about. But one thing I can tell you is that you are lucky you are in a Country that allows you to have the opinions, stupied as they may be, to be shared for others to read. You are either young or old and bitter, I can't tell. I hope by the the time your time on earth is done that you come to terms with whatever it is that has got you where you are today. Otherwise the place you are heading will have alot of others for you to share you thoughts with.

Answer 4

Your poem is crap. You know, since you asked. But hey, tell me what you think of mine:

America the place of freedom where speaking your mind doesn't get you killed or thrown in prison.
America's generosity is expected from the rest of the world whenever there's a problem or a natural disaster but then we are disparaged for having the wealth to begin with. But still we give.
America is expected to police the world and does so very effectively to the best of her ability, and is then criticized for doing it at all.
America - thank God for it because the rest of the world would be speaking German and goosestepping to work every day without her.

So moron, what do you think?

Answer 5

Let me guess...you are not form America? It is actually a wonderful pllace where people are free to think however they want. We would even embrace your right to call our land a sh!t-hole. You see, we believe in freedom, that's it. We do not like immorality, or any of the other nonsense you write about. If you ever get the chance, you should visit. Check out our national parks system. There are truly a lot of beautiful things here. Good day, sir.

Answer 6

Would you prefer to live in another country? If you hate America so much, why not just leave. I am a blessed person to have been born in such a place as America. No one has the freedom I have. Maybe you could try Germany or Russia, maybe you would feel more comfortable in one of these places.

Answer 7

well
America the Beautiful,
or so you used to be.
Land of the Pilgrims' pride;
I'm glad they'll never see.

Babies piled in dumpsters,
Abortion on demand,
Oh, sweet land of liberty;
your house is on the sand.

Our children wander aimlessly
poisoned by cocaine,
Choosing to indulge their lusts,
when God has said abstain.

From sea to shining sea,
our Nation turns away
From the teaching of God's love
and a need to always pray.

We've kept God in our temples,
how callous we have grown.
When earth is but His footstool,
and Heaven is His throne.

We've voted in a government
that's rotting at the core,
Appointing Godless Judges
who throw reason out the door,

Too soft to place a killer
in a well deserved tomb,
But brave enough to kill a baby
before he leaves the womb.

You think that God's not angry,
that our land's a moral slum?
How much longer will He wait
before His judgment comes?

How are we to face our God,
from Whom we cannot hide?
What then is left for us to do,
but stem this evil tide?

If we who are His children,
will humbly turn and pray;
Seek His holy face
and mend our evil way:

Then God will hear from Heaven
and forgive us of our sins,
He'll heal our sickly land
and those who live within.

But, America the Beautiful,
if you don't - then you will see,
A sad but Holy God
withdraw His hand from Thee.

Answer 8

Sounds hypocritical to me writing a judgmental poem to attack judgmental attitudes.

Another example of democratic mind set; First assume the USA is always the evil empire, and never attack other countries for the way they handle foreign affairs

Answer 9

Well , This is quite realistic .I am not American and therefore i cant comment as an American , but i think it can turn on any American.But the way you have expressed the realities and cruelties in America , its quite nice.
Regards,
Sidra

Answer 10

Lol, but replace satan with God. But I hate America also so I'll give you a thumbs up.

Answer 11

wow really depressing and if you r an american and not happy here no one is holding u here. we have men and woman who die so u can write that poem I am blessed to live in a country where we have freedom