I have a smile stretched from ear to ear
I see you walking down the road
We meet at the lights, I stare for a while
The world around us disappears
It's just you and me on my island of hope
A breath between us could be miles
Let me surround you, a sea to your shore
Let me be the calm you seek
But everytime I'm close to you
There's too much I can't say
And you just walk away
And I forgot to tell you
I love you
And night's too long
And cold here
Without you
I grieve in my condition
For I cannot find the words to say
I need you so
And everytime I'm close to you
There's too much I can't say
And you just walk away
And I forgot to tell you
I love you
And night's too long
And cold here
Without you
I grieve in my condition
For I cannot find the words to say
I need you so
2006-06-12 09:55:26 · 13 answers · asked by Anonymous in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
i dint wrote it...
i am a writer but i dont know my creations to anyone...
2006-06-12 10:02:12 · update #1
That's very good. I like it.You are so sensitive...
My side now:
That's a poem of mine. I wrote it some months ago.
I hope it will be a known song soon, because a friend of mine has written music on it and he 've given it to a professional singer to sing it for his new CD.
Tittle: I've been born again!©
Lyrics: by Titania
I've been born again!
In your open arms
in your suddent tears
in your shiny smile.
I've been born again!
My empty eyes
full of hopes again,
my dark soul
full of colors again.
I've been born!
In your secret heart's paths
carring pains as sinkers,
in your colored voice's icons
loving the touches
of your feelings.
I've been born again!
2006-06-12 10:32:40 · answer #1 · answered by ? 5 · 12⤊ 2⤋
Love is more powerful than words!! Sometimes I love you does not need to be said!
Near or far, Heaven or earth, love is always in your heart!
And when it is time again for the words to be said, you will at last find them easy coming!
Life is about love. And without it everything, including the night, is cold!
2006-06-12 16:58:35 · answer #2 · answered by Pixie 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I very nice song sung by Sarah McLachlan
2006-06-12 19:32:57 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
If you wrote that, your very talented. If not, you put forth effort to read it and even write it down which alot of men wouldn't do so I commend you anyway. Good job!!
2006-06-12 16:58:38 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Very heartfelt and beautiful. I hope your pain goes away quickly.
2006-06-12 16:58:13 · answer #5 · answered by Starla_C 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
You are soooo sweet!!! I hope your pain goes away!!! Who is the girl making you grieve???
2006-06-12 17:00:19 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
There once was a man from Nantucket...
2006-06-12 17:01:01 · answer #7 · answered by Kiowa1 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Babe,I have waited SO long to hear you say those words....
2006-06-12 19:47:56 · answer #8 · answered by BellaDonna 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
wow looks like someone is in love.... nice poem.
2006-06-12 17:01:10 · answer #9 · answered by angelchic1706 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
get it published.
2006-06-12 16:59:51 · answer #10 · answered by easywintoo 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋