what do you think?

Question

this was thought up by me and the only help I had was http://rhymezone.com

I've often asked myself,
Where is my love.
When will she reveal herself,
And be my dove.

When will she appear,
And declare her love.
When will she be near,
And be my dove.

Many a night,
I feel alone.
No beauty with her smile so bright,
To call my own.

Answer 1

dont listen to the guy who said u were gay b/c hes green ur a natral and i would date u if i could

Answer 2

Lovely

Answer 3

If you dont want to hear a hard ***'s answer, dont read this.
It doesnt flow wonderfully well. The punctuation isnt correct, but then again a lot of poems purposly have wierd punctuation. In my personal love-hating opinion, it's kind of cheesy, but the mushy part of me thinks it's kind of cute and...yeah. so sorry if you were offended, but you asked what other people thought and there you go. keep writing.

Answer 4

It's very simple. I enjoy more thought out or complex items myself. Don't get discouraged, you can't appeal to all audiences. I'd change the dove statement to either using it in every line for a more defined use of repetition, or only use it in the fisrt or last line.

Answer 5

Sorry bud, I don't think you'll be Poet Laureate just yet.
The structure just doesn't work and you need to think up something to replace the second 'Dove'.
Other than that, a good attempt.

Answer 6

It's beautiful! I truly like it a lot.......and often I feel the same way.

Answer 7

What do I think? I think with all your beautiful poetry you definitely need to be published!

Answer 8

Nice poetry. You may want to get it copyrighted.

Answer 9

sounds like a lonely poet.

Answer 10

I like that