...people who drink and make it ther hobby for leisure...
i just cut it short..
2006-06-07 22:30:57 · 16 answers · asked by Anonymous in Education & Reference ➔ Other - Education
No... you have numerous spelling errors and it is an incomplete sentence.
2006-06-07 22:32:24 · answer #1 · answered by Raynanne 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Well, correct ther to their and a hobby is something you do at leisure. Other than that its perfect
2006-06-07 22:33:44 · answer #2 · answered by will 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I am not an English professor, but let me try to correct that sentence.. I would say it this way ( People who drinks and make that their hobby or leisure...) Don't forget third person singular.
2006-06-07 22:34:41 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
You did not say what they drink. I take it you are referring to alcohol. Any thing not done in moderation becomes bad for you. ok People use their leisure time to drink as a hobby.
2006-06-07 22:35:57 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
People drink and make merry .
When in leisure mood people drink and make merry
DRINKING is a habit and not a HOBBY . Any pursuit of knowledge can be a hobby including collection of empty beer bottles but not drinking.
I made it long.....
2006-06-07 22:35:51 · answer #5 · answered by THATHA75 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
people who drink and make it their hobby for leisure ....this much of the sentence has no grammar errors but it is not a sentence but a incomplete thought
2006-06-07 22:35:25 · answer #6 · answered by kiss 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Their hobbies include leisurely drinking.
2006-06-07 22:34:50 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
nope
people who make drinking a leisure hobby
perhaps
2006-06-07 22:33:39 · answer #8 · answered by well_clever_i_am 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
...People who drink and make it their hobby for leisure.
2006-06-07 22:34:51 · answer #9 · answered by bmxcollections 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
misspelling of 'their'. As it stands, it's a phrase not a sentence.
Also, hobby implies leisure, so ...
" ... people who drink and make it their hobby." is sufficient
2006-06-07 22:33:30 · answer #10 · answered by Owlwings 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
ther......try spell check. THEIR. Is drinking what you call a hobby lol
2006-06-07 22:35:06 · answer #11 · answered by Gone 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋