anyone want 20pts for this question that knows french?

Question

can you make sure all the sentences make sense and all kind of fit. some of them change topic because we aran out of things to say. also can you make sure i used the right verb tense? thanks
1.Bonjour
2.Salut
1.Ca va ?
2.Epouvantable
1.Qu’est-ce que tu as ?
2.D’abord, mes amis et moi nous faisons du ski
1.Ensuite ?
2.Ensuite, je suis tout raplala
1.Ce n’est pas vrai.
2.Comment se sont passées ton weekend ?
1.Ca s’est très bien passe.
D’abord, je suis allée dans un parc d’attraction. Ensuite, j’ai fait un pique-nique.
1.C’est combien l’entrée ?
2.C’était six euros
1.Mon œil
C’était comment ?
2. Je me suis beaucoup amuse
1.à quelle heure est-ce que le train pour un parc d’attraction part ?
2.le train pour parc d’attraction part a huit heures.
1.de quel qui ?
2.Du quai deux
1.Combien coute un aller-retour ?
2.un aller-retour coute neuf euro
1.j’ai mal au dos
2.tu dois faire l’aérobic
1.non, je n’ai pas très envie
2.allez
1.je n’ai pas le temps.
Je craque
2.courage
1.je parti
2.au revoir
1.salut
to get 20pts just anwser the next question and i will chose you as the best anwser

can you correct and rewrite the sentences i did something wrong?

Answer 1

Didn't you already ask this question before? Well, here's the answer again in case you missed it the first time I posted it:

Well, since you haven't provided the instructions and questions to which these are apparently the answers, it's hard to tell what you were trying to do, but here are a few notes:

"Epouvantable" as a response to "ça va?" seems abrupt. I might go with "Comment ça va?" and "Pas terrible" or "ça va?" and "Bof! pas tellement" instead.

"Qu'est-ce que tu as?" means "What's wrong?" so your response doesn't make sense. You might try replying, "Je m'ennuie. J'ai un tas de choses à faire ce soir avant de sortir, et j'ai peur de ne pas les finir." Or something like that.

To be honest, I've never seen the word "raplapla" before. If you're sure of your slang source, then fine.

"Weekend" is singular, so you need a singular form of the verb to go with it: "Comment s'est passé ton week-end?"

Other than that, there are a few spelling errors, conjugation errors, accents missing etc, including:
amusé(e)
à huit heures
de quel quai
coûte
neuf euros
faire de l'aérobic
je pars (partir is an irregular verb)

Answer 2

1. Qu'est-ce que tu as? is what are you having? not doing...The question should be Qu'est-ce que tu fais? What are you doing?
1.à quelle heure est-ce que le train pour un parc d’attraction part ? The A should be capitalized.
2.le train pour parc d’attraction part a huit heures. The Le should be capitalized.
Alright you should be good. I am a third year french student with an A+ in my class so I think you're fine, just capitalize all of your sentences.

Answer 3

salut means hi right? and au voir is like goodbye and deaux is like 2 right?

well anyway i just wanted to show you i can speak french anyway most of them are correct re-check them all carefully and you'll see what i mean.

Answer 4

No, not all correct, and ... quelle est le prochain question?

Answer 5

yes, these are all correct tense, and they make sense.

Answer 6

OUI

Answer 7

what are we supposed to do?