Long Time Comin'
It's been a long time comin'
These tears are nothing new
They've just been bottled and forgotten
But they're finally breakin' through
I've got a lot on my mind
These words just come flowin'
Releasin' my heart
This has been a long time comin'
I smile when my heart is breaking
Laugh when I just want to cry
When people ask me how'm I doing
I say, well, I'm fine and know it's a lie
I can't take the time to breathe
The lonely, desperate sighs
I don't have the time
These feelings I'm feelin'
Can just wait another day
I'm not ready to show the world
I'm falling apart this way
But my eyes still tell the story
No matter how I try to hide
The pain burnin' inside
It's been a long time comin'
These tears are nothing new
They've just been bottled and forgotten
But they're finally breakin' through
I've got a lot on my mind
These words just come flowin'
Releasin' my heart
This has been a long time comin'
2007-12-31 14:30:34 · 2 answers · asked by Heather 2 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
Wow, awesome writing, great expression, wonderful rhyme throughout, and interesting. Keep up the great work! Thanks for asking.
2007-12-31 14:43:43 · answer #1 · answered by lostrebelchild 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
put it music, I think it would make a really good song.
2007-12-31 22:37:22 · answer #2 · answered by Joe Angus 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋