You capture my heart
When I just hear you laugh
And though we are young
You're my missing half
When you're playing with children
And showing them love
You make my heart beat
Like your sent from above
You capture my heart
With your captivating beauty
And inspire me to make
Caring for you my duty
When you're walking, you move
With such style and grace
And I could study all day
Every line of your face
I'll search high and low
Until each other we find
But now for today
You exist in my mind
When we are apart
It's you I will miss
And long once again
To taste your sweet kiss
I'll embrace you so close
Each night and each day
But for now I will search
Till I find you .................Someday
(I would love to e-correspond and get feedback on this)
2007-12-31 00:35:21 · 21 answers · asked by dwsum41@yahoo.com 2 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
It's beautiful!! You're very talented with a pen and paper (or keyboard and monitor lol).
But really, it's one of the most heart-warming pieces I've read in a long time.
~Special Agent M~
2007-12-31 00:43:21 · answer #1 · answered by Special agent M 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Honestly, that could mean anything. Tell her you really want to spend time with her, and see if her response changes. If you really care, make her feel like a princess. No girl can resist a man who really cares about her. Ask her questions about HER, about how she's feeling, what she's thinking. If your life's mission is to be her man, than SHOW HER THAT!! She will be running with you in no time! ~!!!!Also, a **huge*** thought to consider is that maybe she is self conscious of her running. Girls get sweaty and may not think they run very well, especially next to a guy. Try suggesting doing something else, and see if her response changes.
2016-05-28 05:20:35 · answer #2 · answered by ? 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Awwwww!! I love it.. it's really cute! :) did you write that??
2007-12-31 04:33:35 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
That was beautiful! And sad at the same time....
I hope u find her ................ Someday soon! ^_^
2007-12-31 02:24:07 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
it's beautiful. i only found one grammar error. in line 8, your should be you're. other than that, it is amazing. good job =)
2007-12-31 00:44:18 · answer #5 · answered by ♥Sing It For Japan♥ 6 · 2⤊ 0⤋
It's very beautiful.. Whoever this is written for is very lucky. :)
2007-12-31 00:43:11 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Awwww....any girl would be really lucky to have you!
2007-12-31 00:41:05 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
it;s beautiful!
2007-12-31 00:39:39 · answer #8 · answered by ♥Ashley K. 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's beautiful.
2007-12-31 00:39:06 · answer #9 · answered by waddlin' along 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Aww that is soo nice and sweet...
2007-12-31 00:38:47 · answer #10 · answered by M 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋