Blank bleak void where once
the memory of you lived
What smile? Pretty crooked teeth,
perhaps, with eyes of blue
or brown or black at dawn
Lithe nimble scathing wit or
dull plodding talk of you
with no time to stop
for latest news from me
Or selfless interest in
my life and wants granting
all my desires, endlessly...
Memories seize me though
the effort to pulverize
each and every incredible
perfect part of you becomes
with time
a quicker calmer effort
though the pain never dies
nor the glint in your blue eyes.
2007-12-30 19:14:14 · 14 answers · asked by Kurt H™ FC Steaua Bucureşti 3 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
It is a good thought stream. The vocabulary is high, but not overdone. Maybe a little blurry...could be that I had too much glint and tonic...TD
2008-01-01 01:45:42 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
Poems will no longer be able to be TRANSLATED, yet they are able to be REWRITTEN with the help of yet another poet who is conscious suitable the two languages or there could desire to be a cooperation between 2 persons. The final one that writes "the hot poem" into the hot language (English) could desire to actual be a poet. i could desire to study some stable interpretations of super Romanian poets, and have them on Wikipedia. it could be super for the human form, as Shakespeare is. there is all into the realisation of an analogous imagery with the unique. Or Romanian language enable poetic photos by using words completely distinctive from the suitable which technique of the words. Or in English language it is not allowed, as long as I even have been stated. that's no longer easy, yet we could have the perfection with a helping cooperation, with the help of a few community English conversing poets. i could like for British Council to nevertheless save and sell exceptionally into the faculties those English LITERATURE instructions. little ones are additionally suitable to have their thoughts expressed into arts, they are the suitable. Edit: If i could nicely be of any small help in such company interior Wikipedia, no longer a particular individual, here i'm !!! I comprehend this suggests sacrificed time. Edit: Bob, you probably desire a mathematician to work out greater effective below the floor; they have imaginitive and prescient. you will do the rest interior your community language once you're a poet. :)
2016-10-02 22:56:16 · answer #2 · answered by ? 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I didn't get it at first, but it's good. The thoughts kind of stream together and it's comfusing to me, but It's nice.
2007-12-31 07:09:29 · answer #3 · answered by Cinnibuns 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Sad memory... beautifully expressed... Life is a loss sometimes.
2007-12-31 02:53:22 · answer #4 · answered by Analyst 7 · 2⤊ 0⤋
Very nice work.
True emotion.
2007-12-31 00:58:28 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
I'll have a Cheeseburger large fries and a Mountain dew.
2007-12-30 23:17:10 · answer #6 · answered by tyler durden Oƒƒicial 6 · 2⤊ 0⤋
cool, are you from Romania?
2007-12-30 20:06:14 · answer #7 · answered by Francesca 1 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Very nice poem. Glint is such a good word! Thank you for sharing.
2007-12-30 19:37:25 · answer #8 · answered by Marguerite 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
awesome.. your mind is in a good place : )
2007-12-30 19:23:02 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
i like it. it's really good...i have blue eyes.. hehe have a good day!
2007-12-30 19:17:54 · answer #10 · answered by minx7♪♫ 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
wow you have talent. be my friend. i write too!!! i won a few contests but you have true talent
2007-12-30 19:17:49 · answer #11 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋