I had a AMAZING lucid dream and wrote a pice of prose about it. Will you read it?

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I had a AMAZING lucid dream and wrote a pice of prose about it. Will you read it?

I have used quirky grammar and obvious repetition to convey the dream like quality

What do you think it means?

Click here for the story: http://meanderingtrevor.blogspot.com/2006/08/ramshackled-beach-shack-in-sun-man-on.html

2007-12-30 12:15:34 · 2 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry

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Are we talking about "Ramshackle Beach"?

Better than most I've read. The grammar and other devices do help.

A blog with more than one reader is a pretty good accomplishment too!

2008-01-02 02:50:42 · answer #1 · answered by Dancing Bee 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋

I wished to read about your amazing experience but lo!

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good luck

2008-01-01 04:31:22 · answer #2 · answered by ari-pup 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋