I wrote a piece of prose describing a difficult friendship, involving love, bereavement and AIDS.?

Question

Will you read it and comment?

Click here for the short piece of writing:

http://meanderingtrevor.blogspot.com/2007/08/this-is-love-kiddo.html

Answer 1

No offense but I didn't read it through the link.

One thing I will say however, is that many "friendships", even the best, are tumultuous. LOVE is probably the most irrational, ill defined emotion of all, and cannot be judged as right, wrong, appropriate or not, in its most "Real" or assumed sense.

The issues you describe, even just in the question, are "Things" not strictly in ones control, and I won't even go to, GOD. As such we feel impotent, inept, unable to do or say, what might be most effective, yet we still want to somehow be the consoling factor.

Perhaps at everyones end, in our final breath, our last vibration of our inner ear, all that might matter would be to say and hear; "I care."

Steven Wolf

Answer 2

Mostly self-indulgent and not really very good technically...however your message is clear and I appreciate it. Start over and try to cut some fat.....