The letter read, To whom it may concern
Red ink like fire, to the eyes they burn
Long words walk, following where they led
To the end of the page, I learn my dad's dead
A sunken heart cut, served at mid day
Supper's cooling down, I'm sick as I lay
Thoughts pour in as sudden as a dogs bark
Who will bring joy, swinging in the park
I sit down holding to the chains, rocks at my feet
Wishing for anything, I feel something at my seat
Soaring up screaming, I reach for his bright hand
There together in the sky, we look down at the land
2007-12-30 06:15:00 · 2 answers · asked by John G 1 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
Certainly Impactful. Thank you for sharing. Hopefully it will help you through healing.
I must tell you though, rating or judging such a piece is virtually impossible, in how deeply personal it seems to be for you.
Steven Wolf
2007-12-30 06:21:03 · answer #1 · answered by DIY Doc 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
A BEAUTIFUL WELL WRITTEN PIECE!!
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2007-12-30 06:27:56 · answer #2 · answered by moviereeler 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋