Due to the color of Crooks’s skin, Curly does not let him take part in many of the other workers’ activities, such as playing cards in the bunkhouse, and therefore Crooks is very limited to what he can do around the farm.
Can someone re word this so it sounds less wordy and awkward. thank you in advance
P.S.-Crooks is a person (plural; Crooks's car).
2007-12-29 05:24:01 · 9 answers · asked by Anonymous in Education & Reference ➔ Words & Wordplay
This is a lot to say in one sentence. I would divide it into two sentences. Crooks is very limited to what he can do around the farm. Due to the color of his skin, Curly does not let him take part in any of the other workers' activities, such as playing cards in the bunkhouse.
2007-12-29 05:46:19 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Due to the color of Crooks' skin, Curly does not allow him to partake of certain activities with the workers, such as card play in the bunkhouse, which limits what Crooks is able to do around the farm.
2007-12-29 10:10:58 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Due to Crooks’ skin color, Curly doesn't let him participate in bunkhouse activities, such as playing cards; and therefore Crooks is very limited in what he can do around the farm.
2007-12-29 05:38:25 · answer #3 · answered by Robert S 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Due to the color of Crooks's skin, he is very limited to what he can do around the farm; he cannot participate in many of the other workers' activities, such as playing cards in the bunkhouse.
2007-12-29 05:30:20 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Due to the color of Crooks's skin, Curly limits his participation in the other workers' activities around the farm, such as playing cards.
2007-12-29 05:46:27 · answer #5 · answered by emily_brown18 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Because of Crooks's skin color, Curly won't let him associate with the other workers in the bunkhouse, so Crooks can't do much around the farm.
2007-12-29 05:30:40 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Curly curtails Crooks' extracurricular activies due to skin color, severely limiting all of Crooks' farm activities.
2007-12-29 05:56:30 · answer #7 · answered by Richard 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Period after bunkhouse (or a semi-colon), and delete "and therefore"
2007-12-29 05:28:31 · answer #8 · answered by Taylor's Dad 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Crooke can't do jack because he is black!Damn!!!!
2007-12-29 05:32:31 · answer #9 · answered by nach456 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋