Forever Love
I want you to be my forever love
But time seems to laugh mockingly at us
Can we brave the raging storm
Or should we admit defeat, close the umbrella, and drown
I see a future of dark misery
With strong winds tearing at my heart
If our final step, our final chance
Leads us only to goodbye
Do we close the door to our hearts
Leave the windows to our souls broken
And walk away from true love
For fear of admitting such obvious truth
The truth of such passionate love
Clouded by waves of turbulence and sweet peace
So passionate
It can seldom be embraced
The secret to a storm
No matter how beastly its nature
As sudden as it starts
It meets just as abrupt an end
In its wake it can leave destruction
Bruised hearts from words foolishly said
A flood of raw emotions
And broken pieces to put back together
I offer my hand to help guide you
To lead you down the path to my lonely heart
I want to love you til the end of time itself
Come, be my forever love
2007-12-29 04:17:54 · 6 answers · asked by Under the Sea 3 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
I think that's a really good poem, I love the way you stated "the door to our hearts" and "window to our souls", and also the fierceness of the love...anyway, in short, it's an amazing poem.
2007-12-29 04:41:59 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I really like this figure about the power of love:
The truth of such passionate love
Clouded by waves of turbulence and sweet peace
passionate indeed.
2007-12-30 04:56:39 · answer #2 · answered by ari-pup 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
there is present day existence. Apathy, vagueness and the non secular possibilities of the bikini section are with us yet. in my view, it style of feels that existence is a sea coast with, or without, the masochistic components of bikini waxing. i'm fairly pleased with the complete situation right here, which incorporate the commentary that some non secular merchandising is ineffective. strikes me as an exceedingly sensible assessment of a 2nd in time from a sensible attitude. i like it and can persist with it conveniently. that's perfect up my line.
2016-10-20 06:54:19 · answer #3 · answered by ? 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i love it!! being a poet myself i find it lovely to learn from other poets vary well seid
The setting sun is a common
Thing but your love for me
has never been seen
Alone together I wish
It were forever just
sitting here with my head
Upon your chest
our bear skin meets yet
Agene for your touch
Melts me frozen heart
to look into your eyes
makes time stop but my
Heart beat faster
but when I wake from
My slumber I role over
And try to forget
all the good things
that I miss
my heart is now frozen
No longer worm my soul
Has turned black because
You will never come back
So as a lay here trying to
Forget the hurt that you left
me with
2007-12-29 05:15:48 · answer #4 · answered by Morgan K 2 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Awesome!!..
2007-12-29 04:25:30 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
that is a terrific poem
100
lol
2007-12-29 04:25:17 · answer #6 · answered by taytay cutie 7:):):) 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋