all he has going for him is his innocence
but what does innocence mean in a world where innocence is so scarce
does he have to tell anyone
or if he did would that just be more reason more exuse to tear him down accuse him of what they want or take his innocence
it makes him a target not a subject of affection
and the more he talks about it the more upset they get
because he's comeing clean in a world which won't accept his image because of their held beliefs
or is it in fact their held beliefs or just their cover up for the fact that they have no innocence
2007-12-28 12:57:09 · 1 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
and my question is do you like this poem?
2007-12-28 13:01:15 · update #1
It sounds fine to me. Christ-like figure!!
some error here:
- just be more reason more exuse to tear him down accuse him
- 'excuse' - spelling
try expressing it in verse.
2007-12-28 18:59:24 · answer #1 · answered by ari-pup 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋