twisted
How could you ever twist me this way?
Answers become questions, things I'd not say.
I cannot explain my very own genocide,
I stand on the edge of my own suicide.
If I can't reveal my own horrid fear,
The end of myself draws ever near.
I break the rules of my own morbid game,
My life now it feels, straight down the drain.
I drugged myself, with everything known,
Is this really me, or just one of my clones?
The burning inside me is real all the same,
My life to this moment has been only shame.
No purpose, no goal, not even destiny,
I'm climbing the walls of my own sanity.
Why do you point and pretend to know me?
What purpose do I serve ending my own misery?
2007-12-28 09:07:45 · 10 answers · asked by The Dark Prince 3 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
If these pieces you've posted lately are products of your own creative imagination, I'd advise that you compile, publish. If not, I'd love to know the title and purchase the text.
2007-12-29 04:09:27 · answer #1 · answered by ari-pup 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Wow, I hope its only a poem and not an intention of yours, what a pity that would be with a talent like yours, even though its a bit dark, try to turn it around and make it a poem of hope and great things to come for a future generation, its just as easy to be positive as negative, give it a try, I enjoyed it.
2007-12-28 17:18:45 · answer #2 · answered by Judy H 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Wow Baby this is a wonderful poem with so much darkness and so much pieces of light searching to find the way to crawl in to your very soul.You have had a life of lots of pleasure and many more parts of it pain from all the hurt and despair that you have once known.This was awfully painful to see what misery our very soul goes Thur when we are just trying to stay a float,,,I love you with all my heart and pray that one day you will have no more of this dark abyss and find the way Thur so much of the darkness.in your life to finally see and grab on to the light and hold on for dear life.. Shelly
2007-12-28 17:50:59 · answer #3 · answered by Cami lives 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋
DP, you tricked me. It was well written of course, but I thought the subject matter would be reminiscent of the year passing.
2007-12-28 17:33:16 · answer #4 · answered by Semp-listic! 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
I think the last sentence says it all:
The purpose it would serve? THEY would win.....
Just what I read into the lyrics of this sad piece.
2007-12-28 18:06:55 · answer #5 · answered by poe 5 · 0⤊ 1⤋
This is more of a suicide/hate life poem... how does it close out 2007?
2007-12-28 17:17:21 · answer #6 · answered by mah_babez02 4 · 2⤊ 0⤋
It's a good poem to end the year.
-Kara-
2007-12-29 11:46:46 · answer #7 · answered by Silent Anger 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
I've asked the same question ...
2007-12-28 17:55:51 · answer #8 · answered by Marguerite 7 · 1⤊ 1⤋
wow....i love it! im gonna put it one my blog too ok?
2007-12-28 18:32:22 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
can i be ur PRINCESS?lol
2007-12-28 22:04:13 · answer #10 · answered by daniellesmar 2 · 0⤊ 1⤋