Here is a poem for after Xmas and Kim, she waited patiently. Do you like this.?

Question

fables

I am now bleeding, just bleeding for you,
Reliving the abuse that I long ago knew.
Drowned in a lake, surrounded by spires,
How deep the scars, marked in me by fire.

On a long walk, a cold winters night,
Inhaling the stars, drowning in fright.
Did you enjoy all of your twisted games,
You even escaped, without any blame.

Swallow the taste, the one you once craved,
Wallow in filth, you were sick and depraved.
I cry a sad smile, not worth dying for,
I've finally come, to the last golden door.

I look all around, the world is a dream,
Traveling to places, I wake up and scream.
Terror above, as beautiful as the night,
Black Angels abound, swimming in soft blue light.

Answer 1

Indeed, this world is a nightmarish dream.
I like the poem's satirical, rancorous complexity:

"Inhaling the stars,
drowning in fright.". . . . /
"Swallow the taste"

It happens in devious fabulous tales.
It is the merciless stuff hellish nightmares are made of.

Choice of words is excellent: winter, nights, fire, fright, scream, filth, drowning, twisted, sick, depraved.

In such a world only atrocious, malevolent, diabolical, "Black Angels abound."
And we are all simply its joyous toys.

fantastic rhyme scheme.
fantastic poem.

Answer 2

i really thought this poem was so powerful with all the twisted games and how they wallowed in filth. It was like a scary nightmare; and what you have endured thru your life is like a bigger nightmare I know your kim will love her poem;; love you baby Shelly

Answer 3

I love it! Did you write that? I think it was amazing!

Answer 4

awesome! i love it! im gonna put it on my blog ok? is that ok with you? is it ok if i show it off to my freinds? -Kim (~Cheerful_Mealancholy~)

Answer 5

yeah, that's good