Heartbeat.............
Listen to your heartbeat, a sound no one really knows,
laying with you under midnight moon, soft skin now exposed.
Do you feel the whispering wind, blowing through your hair,
holding this woman, an Angel of the night, showing her I care.
Adonis body, a soul of love, do you feel the heat,
Silky smooth your hair aglow, a love we can repeat.
Hold me now for a little while, slumber in my arms,
comforting you in all we do, never meaning you no harm.
sleep, now, baby, feel the morning dew, as I hold you close...
tommy_caswell2000@yahoo.com :) pic in reply :)
2007-12-26 15:34:29 · 6 answers · asked by tommy C 1 in Family & Relationships ➔ Marriage & Divorce
to d** corny for me....
2007-12-26 15:45:41 · answer #1 · answered by curiously bored 2 · 2⤊ 0⤋
Seriously man.
Pony up the coin and subscribe to e harmony or something. Stop trying to pick up women here.
Good luck Romeo
2007-12-26 16:06:12 · answer #2 · answered by box of rain 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
yea, I can hear my heartbeat, when my man is laying next to me butt-naked
2007-12-26 15:48:04 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
its rly a wonderful poem Tom!! your writing lately has been terrific,, keep it up!! you rly put yourself into it.. :-)
2007-12-27 09:27:12 · answer #4 · answered by dragonflyy 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
WOW!!!!! Did you think that up yourself?lol
2007-12-26 15:45:53 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
don't quit your day job.
2007-12-26 15:37:33 · answer #6 · answered by KRIS 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋