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Out Of Dirt
Written by Semper Fi Reborn

I was at first,
Countless grains of dust blowing in the wind.
Settling briefly on the Earth,
Only to be blown around again.

Parts of me settled hither and yon,
On grass and rock alike.
Neither had I any form,
To give clues as to what I was like.

Then God scooped me up,
Like One Who Has A Plan.
And I heard a Mighty voice exclaim,
Let Us therefore make man!

He shaped and formed,
And molded with speed.
His breath He blew,
Causing me to live and breathe.

I praised Him greatly,
And Glorified Him for His Work.
How Awesome Is Our God?
Who made a man form,
Out of dirt?

2007-12-26 11:36:30 · 16 answers · asked by Semp-listic! 7 in Arts & Humanities Poetry

16 answers

As usual Semper, this couldn't have come at a better time in my life, as I struggling with the where's and why's of what I beleive in. You are so very talented my friend and I could only hope to be half the person that you are. Bless you Semper.

2007-12-26 14:23:18 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 4 0

My friend,build a website dedicated to inspiration and hope,and post some of these poems.I have never been at such ease reading these.God has certainly touched you with an exceptional gift!!!

2007-12-26 12:30:59 · answer #2 · answered by soulshadow7669 3 · 2 1

The last lines are very reminiscent of similar lines from the Quran; very interesting.

It is a fine expression of your faith, my friend.

2007-12-26 11:55:56 · answer #3 · answered by Jack B, goodbye, Yahoo! 6 · 4 1

Excellent & edifying as usual! A wonderful gift you've got there!

I second the motion for your website. (Definitely bookmark worthy!)

God bless you and yours!

2007-12-26 16:30:00 · answer #4 · answered by pike942 SFECU pray4revival FOI 7 · 2 1

EXCELLENT work... the motive is to strengthen faith in the reader... target achieved.
I found in this poem...
Humility
Divinity
Creation
and
Devotion

2007-12-26 16:16:38 · answer #5 · answered by P10 2 · 2 1

Though our faith remains strong, this is truly moving! we have been "through the mill" as they say, but faith is never questioned.
VERY LOVELY MESSAGE!
Awesome inspiration, thank you!

2007-12-26 15:05:28 · answer #6 · answered by Reenie: Mom of Marine 6 · 2 1

I like it. Very nicely written.

2007-12-26 14:55:50 · answer #7 · answered by GoAskAlice 6 · 2 1

deep, shows just the wonders of our lord , he is an amazing god.

2007-12-26 13:29:26 · answer #8 · answered by ? 7 · 2 1

Mythology isn't my thing, but the rhymes are OK. Good night!

2007-12-26 11:45:08 · answer #9 · answered by anonymous 7 · 0 3

You have a gift my freind use it,LOve in Christ!

2007-12-26 11:53:36 · answer #10 · answered by Anonymous · 3 1

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