2007-12-26 05:07:19 · 5 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
im not very good thats why i wanted to get advice
This liquid
What is this?
This liquid
the result of my sadness
The sum of this blade and my wrists
This liquid seeping slowly out of my wrists
that helps me seperate ny dreams from my realites
This vile fasinating dangrous liquide called by normal people blood...
2007-12-26 14:30:40 · update #1
allpoetry.com
Its great. They have a whole section devoted to 'dark', They have sections for every thing. Plus people can give you thumbs up and stuff and feedback. Good luck. :)
2007-12-26 05:24:42 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
Join a poetry site....just type...poetry sites....on the internet, and take your pick! Poemhunter.com is only one of four I belong to....and, trust me, you'll get feedback...!
Elysabeth
2007-12-26 15:19:58 · answer #2 · answered by Elysabeth 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
I was going to suggest allpoetry.com, but someone beat me to it. :)
fictionpress.net is another good venue for original poetry.
2007-12-26 14:14:04 · answer #3 · answered by Eireann 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
umm... right here, right now.
2007-12-26 13:23:28 · answer #4 · answered by leesa 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
yes...... pleas..... here..... soon.....NOOOOOOWWWWW
2007-12-26 15:11:55 · answer #5 · answered by Rouxe *(Rue)* 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋