You capture my heart
When I just hear you laugh
And though we are young
You're my missing half
When you're playing with children
And showing them love
You make my heart beat
Like your sent from above
You capture my heart
With your captivating beauty
And inspire me to make
Caring for you my duty
When you're walking, you move
With such style and grace
And I could study all day
Every line of your face
I'll search high and low
Until each other we find
But now for today
You exist in my mind
When we are apart
It's you I will miss
And long once again
To taste your sweet kiss
I'll embrace you so close
Each night and each day
But for now I will search
Till I find you .................Someday
(I would love to e-correspond and get feedback on this)
2007-12-26 00:52:43 · 9 answers · asked by dwsum41@yahoo.com 2 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
thats sweet
2007-12-26 01:04:21 · answer #1 · answered by hp 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
a sweet n beautiful poem written by a sweet n poetic person!ur poem is so sweet!the girl ur mentioning in ur poem is very lucky!^_~keep on writing poems u'll sure be a very great person!
2007-12-26 01:19:52 · answer #2 · answered by •чσυ'яє [[ςρє¢ιαℓ]]• 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Sweet!!
very nice!!
2007-12-26 00:58:18 · answer #3 · answered by Kelly 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i think that is the best poem in the world! it touched my heart. only cuz no one ever said anything like that to me... BUT WHO CARES?!?! i loved it! =D
2007-12-26 01:05:01 · answer #4 · answered by Bexy =D 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
wow...beautiful. i like it lots! Very nicely worded.
good job!
2007-12-26 00:55:42 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
nice one..!
pretty nice............
but i think i have read same poem on the other site..........
or maybe its just that it got familiar wordings with the other one i had read
2007-12-26 00:59:01 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
wow! that was amazing!
*stands up clapping*
2007-12-26 01:10:03 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
really sweet
it touched me ...
2007-12-26 00:56:17 · answer #8 · answered by ....................... 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
that was beautiful!! *crying*
2007-12-26 01:01:02 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋