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When you do a compare and contrast paper
I made an intro...(thesis)
they don't have much similarities
so i am making 2 paragraphs on differences. It is boring to just write : Dr. Langer is a optomist. Dr. Davidson is a pesimist. How do I make it a really good paper, with excitement????? HELP

2007-12-25 04:19:35 · 4 answers · asked by California<3 2 in Education & Reference Homework Help

wait what!?

2007-12-25 04:25:40 · update #1

4 answers

why don't you create a situation that they both go thru, but handle differently due to their own perspectives.

2007-12-25 04:23:29 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0 0

It can be a little risky to write a comparison/contrast paper with just two body paragraphs, one on each of the two things being compared, because you're liable to write everynthing you can about one and then everything you can about the other, losing sight of the fact that you're supposed to be pointing out their differences and/or similarities.

However, it sounds as if you've given your paper sufficient focus to avoid that danger. If you have one paragraph on Dr. L. as an optimist, GIVE EXAMPLES! Quote things he says and cite incidents in which his optimism influences his behavior. Then do the same in the other paragraph for Dr. D. as a pessimist. In the conclusion, try to think of a fresh, more specifically applicable version of the half full or empty glass metaphor.

2007-12-25 05:24:15 · answer #2 · answered by aida 7 · 0 0

Seems you are comparing Optimism with Pessimism. With this as you goal, clearly define both, consider a VENN diagram before writing to show similar traits and those with no relationship between them.

Then try to show contrasts or use a situation that will require both to address and show the differences and if they are both viable solutions or which seems better (you will be bias here based on your own belief structure).

Hope it helps -- good luck with your paper

Erudite Mike

2007-12-25 04:29:33 · answer #3 · answered by Erudite Mike 1 · 0 0

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do it ur self

2007-12-25 04:33:13 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0 2

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