This is for a Christmas present for a friend. She lives in another state than I do. I am going to visit her in a few days and I got her this really nice bear. I have the exact one at home as well. I want to attach a poem that means something around these lines. Whenever you need a hug, hug the bear and it will be like hugging me. I have the the twin at home. She is my best friend and i want a really sweet poem.. so can anyone help?
2007-12-25 03:54:15 · 10 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
When you want to hug me,
Just simply hug this bear,
For though i'm many miles away,
In your heart i will be there.
I have a bear like this at home,
And i will hug it too,
So when i'm feeling miserable,
I'll feel more close to you.
I know this bear is not quite me,
But ... we can all pretend!
So here's a bear to thank you,
For being my best friend.
2007-12-25 04:49:14 · answer #1 · answered by Alex 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
If I were to write for you a poem, the poem would be my expressions.
After I have created this piece, I sign it. (It is my work after all).
I get the feeling that you wish for something from deep with you to be expressed. I suggest that you write down everything you feel about your friendship. Once you get it all down, please feel free to re-post and we who are here to help you will be here for you.
You have already begun: "Whenever you need a hug, hug the bear and it will be like hugging me. I have the the twin at home."
These thoughts are the same as that beautiful movie, "The Little Princess" I believe the dolls name was "Emily"
Sam
2007-12-25 06:15:57 · answer #2 · answered by Sam 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
An emotional poem from Kim whose dad died in Iraq. He published it under open source, so that anyone can copy and redistribute it. Feel free to reproduce this emotional poem.
Haiku ( ä¿³å¥ , Haiku ? ) listen is a kind of Japanese poetry. It was given this name the late 17th century by Masaoka Shiki by a combination of the older hokku ( çºå¥ , hokku ? ) and the haikai (or verses) in haikai no renga . Haiku, when known as hokku were the opening verses of a linked verse form, haikai no renga . The traditional haiku consisted of a pattern of 5, 7, 5 on. The Japanese word on , meaning ‘sound’, corresponds to a mora , a phonetic unit similar but not identical to the syllable of languages such as English. (The words onji (‘sound symbol’) was used incorrectly for a long time and moji (character symbol) is also sometimes used.) A haiku may contain a special season word (the kigo ) representative of the season in which the renga is set, or a reference to the natural world.
Haiku usually combine three different lines, with a distinct grammatical break, called kireji, usually placed at the end of either the first five or second seven sound units. These two parts of a haiku are called the ‘phrase and the fragment’. In Japanese, there are actual kireji words. In English, kireji is often replaced with commas, hyphens, elipses, or implied breaks in the haiku. These elements of the older haiku are considered by many to be essential to haiku as well, although they are not always included by modern writers of Japanese ‘free-form haiku’ and of non-Japanese haiku. Japanese haiku are typically written as a single line, while English language haiku are traditionally separated into three lines.
‘In Japanese, nouns do not have different singular and plural forms, so ‘haiku’ is usually used as both a singular and plural noun in English as well.
Senryu is a similar poetry form that emphasizes humor and human foibles instead of seasons, and which may not have kigo or kireji.
2007-12-25 04:01:36 · answer #3 · answered by ìÇ × 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
May this poem touch the heart of you and your friend
by Owl
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Friendship Poem
No truer friend could there be
Then you for me for all to see.
Please accept this cuddly bear
Which has my heart for you know I care.
If ever you fear or shed a tear
Just hug our little bear and know that I'm near.
Whenever I'm away I'll see my bear
And remember you and this wonderful friendship we share.
2007-12-25 10:37:24 · answer #4 · answered by Owl 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
hmm sure ill try! how about this one.. :
i hope you'll have a marry x-mes
a very bright and happy
with lots of cakes and candy
i wanted to tell you something also,
i want you to know, whenever you need a hug,
hug the little bear, as if it's me, becuse,
forever friends we'll be!
love,
(YOUR NAME)
what do u think for a 12 year old girl who wrote it.. ? =]
hope you like it,
happy holidays,
~Maayan
2007-12-25 04:04:15 · answer #5 · answered by Maayan C 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Roses are red,
Violets are blue,
You better hug this bear,
Or I'll punch you!
Merry Christmas!
2007-12-25 04:09:33 · answer #6 · answered by Neil 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Christmas, what a time for love
What a time for joy
How great to celebrate together
The greatest miracle on earth
Let us be merry and cuddle close
Through the magic of it all
2007-12-25 04:09:30 · answer #7 · answered by JONGERTH 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
No matter how far...
You can be sure that I care
Because this bear has a twin
Our friendship, they'll share!
When you're feeling down
Just give teddy a hug
And across the country
I'll feel your warm love
Love, ********
2007-12-25 04:06:18 · answer #8 · answered by Hershey's Kiss 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
You should really just make a poem of your own.
Just rhyme.
Bear - care - rare
It can be a simple poem but if it's YOUR poem, she'll appreciate it more.
2007-12-25 03:57:47 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
Roses are red
Vioets are blue
I have a twin bear
It reminds me of you
2007-12-25 04:30:53 · answer #10 · answered by Hoolios 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋