“Were Just friends”
One day when its way too late
Your going to say
“I love you”
And then when I don’t reply
Your going to muster up everything you have
And ask..
“Do you love me?”
“You already know what I will say”
“I used to love you”
And I wish I still did
But you were with that other girl
And you were way to blind
To see what was right in front of you
The whole time
I’ve dropped you hints, and I’ve tried to
Make it clear
But you never caught on
So right now
I’m going to have to say
“Were just friends”
Like you did to me all those times.
2007-12-22 11:24:36 · 8 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
I like it. I like the message. It's very straight forward and to the point for a poem but I'm guessing that was the intent. Nice poem. Some things are also not outspoken but you do feel them. Like regret over the guy not being smarter before but at the same time the girl has moved on and is free now and feels that strength too
2007-12-22 11:33:43 · answer #1 · answered by justgoodfolk 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Nice , Wonderful
2007-12-23 05:07:01 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Very good poetry. But its vindictive. Love is never vindictive. Forgive him and move on.
2007-12-23 06:18:43 · answer #3 · answered by P10 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I love your poem. It is really sad on how the guy cheats on the girl.
2007-12-22 20:09:34 · answer #4 · answered by Bloom 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
yes i like it, but next time do one that rhymes. it's easier to follow and more catchy.
zoe
but good try!!
2007-12-22 19:37:07 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
this is soo real and true. sometimes you have to just say it and go on!!!
2007-12-22 19:33:39 · answer #6 · answered by *Roar* 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
i really think it was good
2007-12-22 19:44:56 · answer #7 · answered by Toni A 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Try again.
2007-12-22 19:28:59 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 2⤊ 2⤋