You can sing it to the melody of Away in a manger. This is called, "Away into Glory"
Away into glory, many crowns for His head.
The glorious Lord Jesus will soon raise the dead,
The trumpet will sound, the saint will arise,
The shout of god's Angel, with Jesus we'll fly.
I give you my heart Lord, I ask you today,
Anoint me with power ith your words to say.
you love the dear children, you ask them to come,
To drink from your waters, you cherish each one.
The Battle is nearing, the great day at hand,
The devil defeated, heard never again.
I thank you Lord Jesus, fpr your precious blood,
Your Spirit now in me, I'm filled with your love.
Come all who are weary to Jesus today,
He loves you forever and with Him you'll stay.
The crowns He has waiting to place on your head,
And a title to a mansion, Just as our Lord said...
2007-12-22 10:33:20 · 14 answers · asked by *DestinyPrince* 6 in Society & Culture ➔ Holidays ➔ Christmas
What a beautiful offering from the heart of His redeemed..
Beautiful song from a beautiful heart....
Amen !
2007-12-23 12:58:14 · answer #1 · answered by o 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Nice wording, but in a few of the verses there is a syllable too many for the beats typically allocated for the song. Just an honest opinion.
Liesel.
2007-12-22 16:08:42 · answer #2 · answered by Liesel 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
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2016-09-05 13:41:35 · answer #3 · answered by ? 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Sang the first verse to 'Away in a manger'.
Very good, I must say.
The words fit in perfectly to the melody, and astonishingly they make sense and fit in with Jesus and Christmas.
Very powerful
10/10
2007-12-22 10:39:06 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
this is good but i do have one suggestion. your very last line 'and a title to a mansion' is a little wordy. consider revising to and title to a mansion or title to a mansion. something like that. good job though
2007-12-22 10:44:20 · answer #5 · answered by Amanda 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
God Is Glorified! May He Bless you greatly!
2007-12-23 03:15:32 · answer #6 · answered by Semp-listic! 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Wow. I really like it! Has Semper Fi read it?
2007-12-22 15:08:45 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
very creative and how approiate for the season. i love it, and i know that jesus does too. god bless.
2007-12-22 14:29:32 · answer #8 · answered by ? 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Really gooooooooooood. How long did it take to make it?
2007-12-23 03:36:12 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
That was very good
2007-12-22 10:55:20 · answer #10 · answered by Gone 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋