This is all i have written so far. Some feed back please.
Out of the darkness, her face looms.
Haunting my mind, restricting my sleep.
She led me to an inevitable doom,
By pulling my love in so deep.
I fell for her like so many before.
She struck me down without second thought.
Her denial slammed me against a rocky shore
Of surviving her treachery, I have no shot.
Caged into this world of a shattered heart.
The only option is the release of my soul.
Only until death do I part.
From the prison of a world with agony so full.
Its funny how death is my savior.
The word death reverberates deep in side me
Although its only effect has been on my behavior.
But this brought happiness before you could count to three.
2007-12-22 04:04:09 · 2 answers · asked by Anonymous in Social Science ➔ Psychology
great advice but i am not a druggy
2007-12-22 04:21:44 · update #1
Bit morbtd for me, but you show promise.
Good luck.
2007-12-22 04:16:20 · answer #1 · answered by joe 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Which one was she ,,,marajuana, coacoania,krack,,, stay away from her ,, it's your heart she wants ,, and she has no intention of leaving it intact.. she doesn't care who you are.. go get a little oxygen ,, you can depend on her ,, she'll keep you going strong ,
2007-12-22 04:20:18 · answer #2 · answered by darkcloud 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋