LOVE LOVE AND LOVE
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Love is
Not cold...
Love is
Not hot...
Love is
Not warm...
Love is
Not summer...
Love is
Not winter...
Love is
Not rainee...
Love is
Not soft...
Love is
Not heard...
Love is
Not sweet...
Love is
Not spicee...
Love is
Not tasty...
Love is
Not money...
Love is
Not huney...
Love is
Not ...
Not...not
At all
But...
Feel too all
All too feel with
Love ...
Love...
Love...
Love...
Love...
That is a love...
With love and love...
++otteri selvakumar
2007-12-22 00:33:01 · 5 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
uhh... hmm...
i guess
i dont see the point of this.
2007-12-22 04:44:29 · answer #1 · answered by Leona 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
LOVE is
Not a Poem, yet!
Sorry!, but, that is only my opinion!
2007-12-22 08:44:55 · answer #2 · answered by puzzled 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Try "rainy, spicy, and honey" to correct misspellings. If you are going to do a list poem, you can drop many of the "love is not"s...just say, "love is not" then list what it is not. Constantly saying "love is" line break, then "not...whatever" is annoying and distracts from what you're trying to say.
keep writing...keep editing
2007-12-22 08:59:22 · answer #3 · answered by Kevin S 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
With all due respect, and in my own offering of two cents.
"Love is,
even when it seems it isn't"
Steven Wolf 2007
2007-12-22 09:25:57 · answer #4 · answered by DIY Doc 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
its good, but u can improve it using bigger words, rather than using primary words, but i like it :D
e.g preciouse, valiant.........
2007-12-22 08:43:49 · answer #5 · answered by StArZ 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋