The stairs were steep and seemed to go down forever. Not the best night to test out new boots, but she refused to give in. She wanted those boots. She loved those boots. She would not admit they were a mistake. As far as the stairs went, she was too excited to wait for the elevator. She had waited all week to see this show. First in line to buy a ticket; she had to wake up at the crack of dawn to get there before anybody else. Finally here she was, haphazardly descending the world’s steepest stairs in the world’s best looking, but most dangerous, boots.
2007-12-20 16:01:11 · 6 answers · asked by Avia 3 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Books & Authors
It's interesting. I wanna know more of her anticipation. What kind of show is it that she is going to? A concert maybe. It definately makes want to read more.
2007-12-20 16:10:13 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
It seems pretty interesting and I like the voice. I'm not sure what the show she has a ticket for has to do with it at this point, though.
2007-12-21 00:06:23 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Very interesting voice but It is pointless to me I would need more setup
2007-12-21 19:24:27 · answer #3 · answered by empress_will 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
yes, it was interesting and kept the readers attention, but may i suggest letting out a bit of info (girl's name, where she's going, why)
hope this helps,
Katara
2007-12-21 00:29:16 · answer #4 · answered by Sarah 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
it sounds like a good scene. i suppose it would depend on what was wrapped around it.
2007-12-21 00:59:02 · answer #5 · answered by monkey 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
no, I have already read much
2007-12-21 00:09:34 · answer #6 · answered by Rana 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋