To me, i feel that everyone is a unique person. They express their interests and values both inside and outside of class.
this is a paper about what i learned in America,
i was basiclly writing about the American students have their own interest and values.
anywhere doesn't sound right to you? or do u have a better way to say it?
thank u so much
2007-12-20 14:06:04 · 10 answers · asked by sylvia 1 in Education & Reference ➔ Homework Help
Just reading it as is, I wouldn't have guessed that English was not your first language. However, it could be a little better. "To me, I feel" is redundant, so why not take out the "I feel that"? Then, awkward as it can sometimes be, "everyone" is a singular word and should have a singular personal pronoun to refer back to it. To avoid some of the awkwardness, I would suggest beginning the second sentence, "Everyone expresses his own . . . ." (You've probably heard native-speaker classmates using both the constructions I've suggested changing!)
2007-12-20 14:16:45 · answer #1 · answered by aida 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It sounds a bit awkward to me, I'd phrase it:
to me, I feel everyone is unique. People express their interests and values both inside and outside of class.
2007-12-20 22:14:15 · answer #2 · answered by Banana P 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
I would either say 'to me' or 'I feel' because the way it is now, it is "double-opinion"...then, I would say 'everyone is unique' or 'every person is unique' because right now you have two subjects that describe the same thing namely a person.... I believe I like the option of 'To me, every person is unique.' the best! I like the second sentence...it is nicely written and completely correct grammar...
I am wondering, are you German? I grew up bilingual German-English, and the first sentence sounds very German...
2007-12-20 22:22:24 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
it sounds a bit incorrect i would say "in my opinion every person is an unique individual that is able to express their interest and values both within and outside of the class.
2007-12-21 01:50:08 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I feel that everyone is unique in their own way. People express their interests and values in and out of class.
what you had was great...just remember to capitalize your "I" in sentences. hope I helped!
2007-12-20 22:18:51 · answer #5 · answered by movie_lover324 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I suggest the following changes:
1) Drop "to me"
2) Instead of "feel" use "believe"
Your English is very good. Study hard and it will be great!
2007-12-20 22:21:15 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
Drop the "To me" in the first sentence, as it is superfluous. Other than that, it looks alright.
2007-12-20 22:17:12 · answer #7 · answered by mustanger 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
pretty good, but i suggest to take the 'to me' at the top and instead of 'they' use something else like 'people' etc...
the 'to me' sounds like indian english....lol, well its just how they speak
2007-12-21 08:12:17 · answer #8 · answered by ♥ツ 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
it's really good.. you can get rid to the 'to me,' part at the beginning.
2007-12-20 22:16:43 · answer #9 · answered by choir_kid9 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I'n doo not
2007-12-20 22:17:55 · answer #10 · answered by Agente secreto da SD-6 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋