Complete the paragraph below. Make it a paragraph of comparison and contrast. Begin by writing about the similarities between the two things. Go on to write about the differences.
Baseball is a sport that many people enjoy. Some people prefer to watch it on television, while others buy tickets to see games in the stadium. Some elements of a game are the same no matter where it is seen.
Please can someone help, I struggle in English and would greatly appreciate it, thank you.
2007-12-20 04:53:00 · 3 answers · asked by Smooth86 1 in Education & Reference ➔ Homework Help
Similarities: you see the game whether at home or at the ground and you know the final result whaen it happens.
Differences: If you are at the game you experience the atmosphere, the friendship with other supporters, the weather, the problems of parking, transportation etc.
At home you experience none of those, but you get to watch the game in comfort and without paying for a ticket. You do see only what the camera chooses to show you, whereas at the game you can see whatever you want. Hope this helps.
2007-12-20 05:44:55 · answer #1 · answered by SKCave 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
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2016-04-10 09:47:20 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
What are you comparing or contrasting? I only see baseball.
2007-12-20 05:00:47 · answer #3 · answered by petra 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋