Marguerite put him right
Squirrel got sheepish
Now I want a fight
2007-12-20 04:04:14 · 14 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
Annabella is so on the button and I don't care how many sillyballs I have in it.
2007-12-20 05:04:55 · update #1
great work Moleypenney (did you work for bond?)
and another euwaite masterpiece....
but wouldn't the last line work better as:
"Now I want a fluffin"?
2007-12-20 13:22:56 · answer #1 · answered by Kurt H™ FC Steaua Bucureşti 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
sure, those are good, Your imagery is like shimmering silk. merely slightly extra suggestions.... haiku does require adherence to those policies.. 5-7-5...and there are no western literary strategies allowed.. ex: alliterations, metaphors,onomatopoeias, similes, and so on. and so on. ...And no punctuation or capitalization. as quickly as we wander from the agricultural into the city or use humour or satire we are writing senru, which you haven't any longer performed. i admire this form of poetry and the belief of having them stand on my own or linked like siblings is such as TD's Trigees. A undertaking and it makes them much extra thrilling. and particular. i think of they're very demanding to place in writing so kudos to you!
2016-10-08 23:54:38 · answer #2 · answered by ? 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
What? Did someone just try to pull the wool over my eyes again?
I am with Turdla, I think I missed something here, like maybe graduating 6th grade.
2007-12-20 07:17:16 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 2⤊ 1⤋
I feel extremely illiterate at times when I read your stuff my friend, and that of some others.
It is worth coming for a visit each day.
2007-12-20 07:04:11 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 3⤊ 0⤋
Do you like my new poem?
*****
There’s a patch in the corner of my garden
Filled with carrots and turnips and rutabaga
Underground goodies, row after row
All planted there for my little blue mole…
*****
2007-12-20 05:21:57 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 4⤊ 0⤋
But . . . but . . . you don't have the proper amount of syllables for a haiku. How's about calling it a Yahoo instead?
2007-12-20 04:49:26 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 3⤊ 0⤋
Doesn't it seem quite right and proper that Free man's loose change is up above him. Shilding his eyes with the *Loose Stuffs*!!!
Step Down Mahn!!!
2007-12-20 04:58:21 · answer #7 · answered by Freeman ®™© Resurrected 2 · 3⤊ 1⤋
I feel like a hoke oooooooh this morning, whatever that is.It sounds like a bad cold.ahha now thanks to Annabelle I finally got it. hehe.
2007-12-20 04:32:32 · answer #8 · answered by ? 6 · 3⤊ 0⤋
Violence is lightning
Don't give in to temptation
Peace is forever
2007-12-20 07:25:47 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 2⤊ 0⤋
Baaa, baaaa.
2007-12-20 04:36:36 · answer #10 · answered by Lady Annabella-VInylist 7 · 4⤊ 0⤋