each and everyday .....
do you feel the passion that I have for .....
you each and everyway .....
do you know how much I cherish you .....
do you know how much I care .....
did you know that just for you my love .....
every second I'll be there .....
when I kiss your tender lips my love .....
my heart it fills with bliss .....
with the passion in your eyes my love .....
our special love can't miss .....
sincerely, jerry aka poet man
54 years old & still going strong
2007-12-20 01:30:18 · 17 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
I absolutely adore your poems!!!Please never stop writing them!!!...
2007-12-20 01:36:53 · answer #1 · answered by ? 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Jerry, this is nice, but seems so private...you know..just for your loved one. I have some poetry too (on my home page site, dedicated to my hubby), but the poems are mostly personal, so I don't share them with anyone except my Honey. But yeah, it's a nice poem.
2007-12-20 09:34:42 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
I feel ya! But I would feel ya more if you did this to the first stanza:
each and every day....
do you feel the passion I have for you...
in each and every way....
I really like the 2nd stanza, classic romantic poetry! keep up the good work!
2007-12-20 09:34:53 · answer #3 · answered by RG_76 2 · 2⤊ 0⤋
Absolutely!
2007-12-20 09:33:10 · answer #4 · answered by Schizo 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Yes, I can feel the burning love inside you.
I can even smell it too, sweetie. Nice one.
2007-12-20 09:36:46 · answer #5 · answered by Heaven Hill 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Nope, sorry, can't feel your burn,
I have this firewall, see...
no matter which way you turn
your fire can't ever reach me
burnt too many times
though I do like your rhymes
2007-12-20 09:37:20 · answer #6 · answered by Squirrley Temple 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
this poem melts my heart....these are the words every woman would like to hear from the person they love.
2007-12-20 09:34:01 · answer #7 · answered by ilovemessages 7 · 3⤊ 0⤋
Beautiful! â¥
2007-12-20 10:32:45 · answer #8 · answered by F-1 says KISS IT! 7 · 4⤊ 0⤋
You are such a romantic! How come there aren't more guys like you?
2007-12-20 09:53:14 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 3⤊ 0⤋
i hope that i have something to say like that to someone when im your age. lucky! love.
2007-12-20 09:34:18 · answer #10 · answered by a lady capricorn 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋